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Maple Syrup

 
 
tcb
 
Reply Mon 27 Oct, 2003 05:01 pm
Greetings Everyone.
I have been lurking for a few months, but that condition is about to change by virtue of the following, which while incomplete, represents the first chapter of a novel in progress.
Cheers
Ted

Maple Syrup. It's hard to believe, but that was at the root of everything that happened in Four Chimney's Vermont. Everything that was sweet and right. Everything that was sour and wrong. That's just the way it was.
Old timers, (there are still a few real one's left) will tell you that's the way it's always been.
"Been that way as long I can remember"
Others, those who were young enough to fight in WW 2 generally agree with their elders, occasionally with some modification:
"More snow, way back when...deeper, whiter, colder.
"That's it? That's the only difference?"
"Yep, that's about it."
Of course, Four Chimneys was not unlike any other town whose economy was tied to one specific industry. In Gloucester, it was fish, In Bethlehem. steel and so the story goes.
But maple syrup? The cold hard facts were these: Most sap suckers in Four Chimneys, were hard working, god fear'n pioneers. Up and out early, and out they stayed until the very last rays of the sun cast no more shadows, and the snow began to crunch under the weight of their boots. And if they were lucky, the warmth of mid day might have permitted the maple sap to run freely ..for a while. Long enough to fill a few pails with the sweet brown blood that for them was life...as much as that which throbbed through their very veins.
Yes, those long cold snowy days of winter, when the deer tracks and foot prints of yesterday were gone, re-filled smothered and smoothed with fresh fallen snow, and the cold was too much for the brown blood and if you hit your tap hard...hard into the maple bark, it was fruitless for the fruit was stubborn and the wind was cold and life was hard.
Then, sometime, around mid April, when the light was just right, you'd see swarms of the tiniest winged creatures, spinning in spirals, darting back in forth, going nowhere but non-the less performing an invaluable service for the people of Four Chimneys Yes, it was the dance of spring and they rang the inaudible bell that only the maple trees could hear.
So by the time May rolled around, the sap was warm and thin and completely in compliance with the forces of gravity. And the giant Silver Maples were in all their glory and gushed forth with their sweet nectar and filled pail after pail. And no one could remember the cold hard winter anymore and the grass was so green and the daffodils so yellow, the people of 4 Chimneys wiped white and gray from their memories. And if they tried, very hard, they could almost say the word "winter." But it wasn't easy.

But what to do with all that sap? The fires burnt bright with orange and the syrup was boiled and skimmed and cooled and boiled again and strained and filtered and poured into cans and bottles and molds and stored on old cedar shelves. And next fall there would be syrup and maple candy and brown-frosted doughnuts and Four Chimneys Vermont Grade A would be on the labels and medium amber would be the color of choice and the price would read $22.00 for a half gallon and $6.00 for 2 pints and maple Syrup would be on the lips of the locals and tourists alike...and everyone who passed through that 3 light town would know, well before they reached that 3rd light exactly what Four Chimneys was about. How could they not? Even if you absolutely loathed, despised Maple syrup...as if anyone could, you couldn't help but stop at our general store...Nope, people would actually pass it and then, as if some invisible hand had reached out and grabbed them, they'd turn around, sometimes they'd be a mile out of town...it didn't much matter, the lure of that country store would pull them back. The beautiful sound of that bell jingling on the door the delicate and intricate inlay's on that old brass latch...oh and the floor. Those wide, dark brown pine planks, almost exactly the same color of that wondrous raw maple sap... dappled throughout with those flattened silvery nail heads.
Oh I know what you're thinking…. you've been in other country stores before, you seen the apothecary jars filled with candy, seen the antique bronze cash resisters, but I'll bet you anything you've never experienced anything like the splendor and dignity of this place. Just to listen to that floor creak... such sweet music, the Stradivarius of floor creaks that's what it was. Mrs. Swift, she's a widow now, been a widow for as long as most can remember but, there I go, painting a syrupy tapestry of Four Chimneys...when the truth was and is colder, crueler more human...more inhuman than maybe I should admit, than maybe you want to hear but maybe that's why we're here maybe that's why Four Chimneys is so intriguing...Could it be, just maybe that we all come from Four Chimneys.
But as I said before, there I go again, rambling when I should be introducing the narrator. But first, maybe you want to know a little about me.

My name is Carolyn Beach. Ask around town, they'll tell ya the Beaches have been inhabiting these parts for close to 150 years…I'm a 5th generation 4 Chimmney-er. My father, a doctor like his father, recently died at the age of 78, yet unlike Grandfather, Dad wasn't your stereotypical country physician. No, there was a lot more to his practice than delivering babies and signing death certificates Carl Beach was a noted surgeon. His skill with the scalpel took him far away from the shingle he hung outside our house after graduating from Medical School…5 years before I was born in 1958. And far away from me and mom and my older sister Jean.

My mother, who is proud to share her name with me, is thankfully alive still, but she misses Dad and pines for him. Sometimes I see her tending to the circle of flowers in the bed that surrounds Dad's Shingle Post. She says nothing, but if you look carefully you can see her lips moving ever so slightly, and there is a smile, faint though it is, yet in her heart I imagine it's as bright as the midday sun.

Everyone always says that Jean and I look more like Mom's sisters than her children. I guess we inherited Dad's lankiness, but all the rest came from Mom. Her long yet thin blond hair, fair complexion, pug nose and full mouth complete with the smallest teeth you've ever seen were all passed down to us. And true, though rare, neither my sister or me have ever had a cavity. Not a one.

Oh you must forgive me, I never shut up, I can't help it, my mind just races constantly?-one thought after another in rapid fire. You'll hear more about the Beaches as the story progresses, but now I must introduce Thomas. I can tell you, you're very lucky to have such a fabulous gentleman as your chief storyteller. Thomas is true to his word, never exaggerates and has a special way with words that most people don't. I know I don't.

One footnote. Thomas is blind, always has been and like Dad used to say: "Always will be." It's really not that important, but I thought you ought to know. So bye for now, we'll meet again. Here's Thomas…

Thomas was the name given to me by Mrs. Whipple. Never knew what, if any name my birth mother gave me and even if she had and I learned later that I was a Jim or a Paul, I'd still go by the name Mrs. Whipple picked out.
Even though she raised me from a pup, I was never quite comfortable calling her Mom or Mother or anything other than that. Her first name was Sarah, but it just ain't proper or fitting for a child to call his guardian by her first name. Not by my reckoning anyway.

Mrs. Whipple found me, just like you hear bout on the TV, well not exactly, not wrapped in a blanket on the hospital doorstep, heck the closest thing to a hospital here in 4 Chimneys is Doc Beach's house, and she'd have no business being way up in that part of town, unless she was ailing and as long as I knew that woman she never had even the slightest cold, a touch of arthritis maybe, but I can tell ya, if the Beach's had to depend on folks like Mrs. Whipple for their income, they'd all be on welfare today.
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Letty
 
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Reply Mon 27 Oct, 2003 05:32 pm
Ted, TCB. There is no doubt that you have a talent for telling a tale. I hope that you are not offended by my remarks here, but it becomes very difficult for many of us to read such a long post. Perhaps if you could compress it into just a synopsis, you would get more feedback.

Welcome to A2K, TCB..
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tcb
 
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Reply Mon 27 Oct, 2003 06:00 pm
<it becomes very difficult for many of us to read such a long post.>
Irony is so rich Letty.
On another board I am the author of "The Economy of Words" (Volume 3?)...an excorticating thread for the "Verbose"
Thanks for the welcome.
Cheers
t
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Letty
 
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Reply Mon 27 Oct, 2003 06:18 pm
tcb, I'm afraid that I'm given more to poetry and music...and for you and Vermont and the tapping of the maple:

Pennies in a stream
Falling leaves of Sycamore
Moonlight in Vermont

Icey finger waves
Ski trails on a mountain side
Snowlight in Vermont

Telegraph cables
Sing down the highway
Travel each bend in the road
People meet in this romantic setting
Are so hypnotized by the lovely...

Evening, summer breeze
Warbling of a Meadowlark
Moonlight in Vermont
Telegraph cables
Sing down the highway
Travel each bend in the road
People meet in this romantic setting
Are so hypnotized be the lovely...

Evening, summer breeze
Warbling of a Meadowlark
Moonlight in Vermont

You and I and Moonlight in Vermont
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tcb
 
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Reply Mon 27 Oct, 2003 06:21 pm
The only way to really embrace those words is to hear FAS singing them.
c&c=Cheers & Ciao
t
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Letty
 
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Reply Mon 27 Oct, 2003 06:29 pm
FAS? Before you ciao, tell me who?
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tcb
 
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Reply Mon 27 Oct, 2003 06:47 pm
Francis Albert Sinatra
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realjohnboy
 
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Reply Mon 27 Oct, 2003 07:14 pm
tcb: please don't go away mad. Letty took the time to read your post (as did I) and took the time to respond. You should feel grateful; most of my postings in this category get totally ignored.
It seems to me that her point was well taken. You could have taken a break before you got to introducing Carolyn and the blind boy. Save them for later. I want to learn more about maple syrup and Four Chimneys. Don't rush things. -johnboy-
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tcb
 
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Reply Mon 27 Oct, 2003 07:33 pm
RJB
What ever gave you the impression that I was going away, let alone in a huff?
Not a bit of it.
Letty's comments as well as yours make perfect sense.
That's the problem with Message Boards, unless you use emoticons (which I do not use) people have to know you to separate the "wheat from the chaff"
I will post more stuff, but in easy-to-chew bites.
c&c
Ted
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Letty
 
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Reply Mon 27 Oct, 2003 07:41 pm
Sinatra?Good grief, I've forgotten more than you'll ever know about him. Smile Lord have mercy, how that man could sing.

Johnboy. I thought that you had gone for good. Welcome back to the red clay of Nelson County...
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tcb
 
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Reply Mon 27 Oct, 2003 08:04 pm
<Sinatra?Good grief, I've forgotten more than you'll ever know about him>
I can see that by your instant grasp of the initials FAS butted up against one of his signature songs.
But yes, sing he could.
c&c
t
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Letty
 
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Reply Mon 27 Oct, 2003 08:35 pm
I get too hungry for dinner at eight
I like the theater but never come late
I never bother with people I hate
That's why the lady is a tramp
I don't like crapgames with Barons and Earls
Won't go to Harlem in ermine and pearls
Won't dish the dirt with the rest of the girls
That's why the lady is a tramp
I like the free fresh wind in my hair
Life without care
I'm broke, it's oke
Hates California is cold and is damp
That's why the lady is a tramp

REFRAIN 2
I go to Coney-the beach is divine.
I go to ball games-the bleachers are fine.
I follow Winchell and read ev'ry line.
That's why the lady is a tramp.
I like a prizefight that isn't a fake.
I love the rowing on Central Park Lake.
I go to opera and stay wide awake.
That's why the lady is a tramp.
I like the green grass under my shoes.
What can I lose?
I'm flat! That's that!
I'm all alone when I lower my lamp.
That's why the lady is a tramp.

REFRAIN 3 (reprise)

Don't know the reason for cocktails at five.
I don't like flying-I'm glad I'm alive.
I crave affection, but not when I drive.
That's why the lady is a tramp.
Folks go to London and leave me behind.
I'll miss the crowning, Queen Mary won't mind.
I don't play Scarlett in Gone With the Wind-
That' s why the lady is a tramp.
I like to hang my hat where I please.
Sail with the breeze.
No dough-heigh-ho!
I love La Guardia and think he's a champ.
That' s why the lady is a tramp.

REFRAIN 4 (reprise)
Girls get massages, they cry and they moan.
Tell Lizzie Arden to leave me alone.
I'm not so hot, but my shape is my own.
That's why the lady is a tramp!
The food at Sardi's is perfect, no doubt.
I wouldn't know what the Ritz is about.
I drop a nickel and coffee comes out.
That's why the lady is a tramp!
I like the sweet, fresh rain in my face.
Diamonds and lace,
No got-so what?



Sheeeeze. He just rocked with his rhythm and his phrasing...still a prick, however. Razz
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tcb
 
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Reply Mon 27 Oct, 2003 08:54 pm
Well
If our appreciation of art was predicated on the everyday qualities of the artist, Hart, Rodgers, Sinatra and Beethoven (to name a few) would be unknown peasants resting for all eternity in unmarked graves.
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Ceili
 
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Reply Mon 27 Oct, 2003 09:50 pm
I think you have a lovely fluid story telling style.
It has a dreamy quality that stirred up many memories of mine from la Cabane au Sucre in Quebec.
I'd love to read more.
Ceili
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tcb
 
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Reply Mon 27 Oct, 2003 10:05 pm
Thank you Ceili
I'm glad you were touched
I will post some more.
Cheers
t
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Letty
 
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Reply Tue 28 Oct, 2003 06:13 am
tch, Often knowing the background of an artist tends to taint, somewhat, the overall performance, but, as someone once told me when I complained about Wood Allen, it doesn't matter if he is worthless as long as he doesn't do worthless stuff.

Good morning, from Florida.
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tcb
 
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Reply Tue 28 Oct, 2003 06:39 am
Good morning from NY Letty (though my kids and my parents live in Boca Raton, so much of me is always in Florida?-literally and spiritually)
I have read a few of your poems and other commentary and I am quite impressed with your talent as well as the overall ambiance of this place.
The creative spirit is alive and thriving here to which I say "Amen"
Cheers
t
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Letty
 
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Reply Tue 28 Oct, 2003 06:58 am
I appreciate the acknowledgement, tcb. I rarely had a chance to write when I taught. Interesting coincidence that you have family in Boca Raton.Beautiful stretch of beach that.

Well, must go about doing the mundane stuff now.
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tcb
 
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Reply Tue 28 Oct, 2003 07:15 am
Mundane is my middle name
Later
t
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Dickster
 
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Reply Tue 28 Oct, 2003 10:55 pm
My take on Maple Syrup...
I love the stuff. I drown my pancakes in it along with the sausages, bacon, and eggs. A little habit I picked up from the younger years. I feel like going to Vermont to explore little towns like 4 Chimneys, sounds fulfilling compared to all the urban hustle and bustle. Nice and peaceful, you know. I just wanted to say one thing... Carolyn Beach is the main narrator is what I'm supposing and the way her stuff is written it seems to me that she's pretty countryish and simple-like. I would imagine her not referring to her father or mother as "father" and "mother" but something more like Pa and Ma. As for Thomas, I don't know too much about him yet so I can't talk. Anyways, this is coming from an 18-year-old that just likes to read a lot so, uh... just carry on.
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