mcee fya
 
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Reply Tue 19 Jun, 2007 06:32 am
you left your boxers on my bedroom floor
next to a bottle and my head so sore
an empty wallet and a nasty chore
seems you knock from door to door to door
no time for the poor
oh poor little me
i cant sleep
maybe i read to deep
always stepping with my heart
from the start
always stepping with my heart
fighting it out and im sorry if youre bruised
i am
broken and confused
thought i would finally feel appreciated
instead your loves left me frustrated and intoxicated
so its back to the bar
where i first watched you from afar
where you sang only to me
and danced all night like we were free
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mcee fya
 
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Reply Tue 19 Jun, 2007 11:45 am
oh yeah soz proff i meant 2 say i really enjoyed ur poem its very articulate thats the word dat springs 2 mind n e hoo Very Happy glad 2 c ur still ere doin ur thing, keep at it, n ave u seen dat boiled dick police mans story forum thing....great writing dat woz a pleasure 2 read im just 2 wrecked 2 write out but u shud read it its great
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edgarblythe
 
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Reply Wed 20 Jun, 2007 06:06 am
i see the words as sparrows
who cannot reach the ground
stuck in trees like arrows
feathers all tucked and bound

that once flew the straight and narrow
until they were traced and found
it chills me to the marrow
but they'll never be set down
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Endymion
 
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Reply Wed 20 Jun, 2007 09:22 pm
feel like my mouth is sealed tight
Wait for the light of day
In this everlasting night
Does no one feel the heat?
The world struggling beneath
Seems like everyone's a thief of life
nothing feels right
Wana drink until it all just goes away
I read the things they say
See right through their games
I don't know if I should be laughing
Or running out into the street
Does no one feel heat
Until its too late?
F*ckers got you beat
With their hate
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mcee fya
 
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Reply Fri 22 Jun, 2007 09:27 am
constantly ticking
i wanna smash that clock
like captain hook
wont it stop?
take me back
where innocent eyes
saw nothing but bliss
even hate lingered with me
sweet as a kiss
your'e taking the piss
just passing the time
im tossing and turning
to a tick tock in my mind
tired and wired
till the day i flat line
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MC Kruger
 
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Reply Fri 22 Jun, 2007 11:15 am
ever so stressed
ever so depressed
loving life thats not to be hated
accepting love thats not debated
flushing the hate
rushing the fate
smoking, eyes red like coke cans
sending the brain into different zones
like world touring rock bands
the truth shinin through like sparkled chrome
finally its connecting like 2 guys shakin hands
that the only place we love is the one thats called home

im new to writing poems.. if that was one lol
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Endymion
 
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Reply Sat 23 Jun, 2007 01:11 am
There were prayers
That echoed
Along plain corridors
And coloured glass
That caught the low
Evening sun
Mathematical, symmetrical
Beauty
Gold and turquoise dome
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MC Kruger
 
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Reply Mon 25 Jun, 2007 02:28 am
knock knock
heart racing
knock knock
face red, rush of adrenelin
knock knock
feeling sorrow and anguish
knock knock*police at the front door..*
left running out the back one
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Mohamadz
 
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Reply Mon 25 Jun, 2007 01:45 pm
Face up in my bed
Hands crossed on my chest
Looking up at the ceiling
Covers are up to my neck

I can think of all the memories
Some good and some bad
Eyes caught in an episode
Every blink takes me back

I was just a young dreamer
With a few little thinking
Angry mood like my father
Joe dark like my mother.

Just A lebanese little kid
Never rich but artistic
Educated street smart
Intell actually gifted.
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Mohamadz
 
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Reply Mon 25 Jun, 2007 02:00 pm
hey mc kruger what happen to the neveren.... man the reply is locked what that means??
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Mohamadz
 
  1  
Reply Mon 25 Jun, 2007 02:03 pm
I reach my pen
Straight to the heavens
Cause I've seen an angel sitting
Lucker Decker for kissing

Tasty succulent mission
It's a vision for living
There's a valley in the distance
Life's gauntlet of wishes

No permission
And nobody seeing in different
Everybody's truly gifted
And they learn how to listen



Bright light here I come
Hitchhike with a thumb
White robes and gold gates
Embracing the love.

No more knives, and no guns
No one hustling drugs
Not a single growling stomach
Stealing meals for some lunch
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mcee fya
 
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Reply Tue 26 Jun, 2007 05:19 pm
ever felt like this
when so much trouble hits
that you just dont give a ****
he said my heads in the clouds
i had no reply
just popped another pill
and let out a sigh
dont even wanna try
to revive
i'll survive
but **** it if i die
i took it
its mine
sick of being a shoulder
you all weigh like boulders
pull me down
when i turn around
your'e nowhere to be found
its always my round
my sorrows that drown
its easy to preach when youre a leach
i bridged the breach
for you all
in your times of need
now im alone on my knees
telling the anonymous world
how you i grieve at your greed
bleed the blood you suck from me
take it all
its free
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Endymion
 
  1  
Reply Tue 26 Jun, 2007 06:34 pm
mcee fya - i wish i had your style
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Endymion
 
  1  
Reply Thu 28 Jun, 2007 02:08 am
three more
unnecessery
dead
and gone
three more and still
the game
plays on
it's the same old song
its roots are strong
same polititians who get it wrong
and before long
three more
are gone



* m f - hope you're ok
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mcee fya
 
  1  
Reply Thu 28 Jun, 2007 06:49 pm
yeah dude im always ok, **** em! lol Cool
its friday Laughing time 2 let go.... n thanx 4 da feedback (much appreciated)
means alot from sum 1 so talented (kisses ass) lol
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Endymion
 
  1  
Reply Thu 28 Jun, 2007 07:40 pm
Laughing

You have a great weekend, mcee fya
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Mohamadz
 
  1  
Reply Fri 29 Jun, 2007 01:43 am
God give me all the heart~~
To live in clean life side~~
God let me walk in bright light~~
Let me enter da bolt~~
Even if am gon to replay many times da episode~~

Its long story ~~
Full off bad history~~
One thing i am fool think other make me king~~
<<gd>>~~
Am not here now <<so>>face to face am thier spring ~~
These heat me more than diss let me in da confusadness~~
Why they hate me when am still harmless~~
Even if am less then them~~
They may only look on themselves~~

______________________________________________


~~~~~MOHAMMAD~~~~~
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mcee fya
 
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Reply Thu 5 Jul, 2007 11:45 am
there i go again
back into the dark
**** i fell so hard
i think i broke my heart
definately lost my mind
became part of another kind
they all stood and stared
as the episode
played on
control was out the window
as my sanity was gone
cant i find some guidance
look forward stead a back
screaming in the silence
caused my thoughts to crack
im reaching out
to cold hands
dead eyed glares
and laughs
are you really so surprised
that i colapsed into relapse
they say that they'll disown me
if i dont change my ways
but forgiveness has outgrown me
im living in a daze
i cried and cried that night
i cried myself sober
something died that night
i think my life is over
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Endymion
 
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Reply Thu 5 Jul, 2007 03:43 pm
She danced that night
Like ravens in the sun
And apple blossom
Scattered by cool breeze
Her eyes were wide
She was a chemical child
Spiralled by delight
Under beech trees
She was mesmerised
By patterns from the moon
And counted every bloom
Like golden leaves
And when the moon fell down
She curled there on the ground
And I sang to her
Until she fell asleep
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mcee fya
 
  1  
Reply Fri 6 Jul, 2007 11:08 pm
and she did X
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