The silhoutte of the Palms.....

Reply Tue 10 Feb, 2009 05:22 am

Against a darkened sky
with the wisps of clouds
Floating by

when suddenly the moon
So full and delicious
Appears in its splendor
Cold and auspicious

The mirror of the water
Beneath the light beams
Reaching up with the mist
With fingers that gleam
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Reply Tue 10 Feb, 2009 12:32 pm
Good afternoon, letty. That poem certainly captures the scene very well. I have to get offline just now to take my wife to a follow up appointmant. Will revisite this thread later.
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Reply Tue 10 Feb, 2009 02:58 pm
Nice, Letty! I have never looked here - original writing. I like it!
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Reply Tue 10 Feb, 2009 05:36 pm
Its good to see our talented writers with new work. I give it a five out of five stars.
Reply Tue 10 Feb, 2009 05:45 pm
Thanks, Urs and edgar. My Lord, I had forgotten those valuable/not valuable ratings on Abuzz.

The poem was inspired by the full moon appearing behind whispy dark clouds as it set over the intercoastal waterway. I have never seen a more haunting sight.
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Reply Thu 12 Feb, 2009 02:05 pm
A thumbs up from me for sure. . . .
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