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Well I hope I'm proud of myself.

 
 
Reply Thu 23 Oct, 2008 12:16 pm
On a site for lyrics writers, I logged in to tell Mr X I like his new lyric. -A few lines could be tweaked a little.- And I gave him five stars.

He messages back, saying I was right; the lyric is no good. He removed it.

I messaged again, telling him it was good, just a line or two might have been improved.

So I get another message. He is sorry he wasted our time with his bad lyrics and he has removed all of them from the site. And good bye.

O-o-okay- - -

I don't want to cut short a man's dream this way. Hell, most of my lyrics could use a major overhaul. Same is true of many song lyrics that have been wildly successful. You do your best and then take your chances. This man is his own worst enemy. I hope he comes to see that.
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BumbleBeeBoogie
 
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Reply Thu 23 Oct, 2008 12:21 pm
@edgarblythe,
Edgar, you can't please everyone.

BBB
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Cliff Hanger
 
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Reply Thu 23 Oct, 2008 01:21 pm
@edgarblythe,
It sounds like he doesn't understand constructive criticism, or as you put it :his own worst enemy." I feel kind of bad for him.

Then again, maybe he's being a drama-king?
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Cliff Hanger
 
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Reply Thu 23 Oct, 2008 01:26 pm
@edgarblythe,
Wait a minute-- this guy sounds like a total pain in the ass. Do not give it another thought.
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Merry Andrew
 
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Reply Thu 23 Oct, 2008 01:32 pm
What Cliff Hanger said in his second post.
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edgarblythe
 
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Reply Thu 23 Oct, 2008 07:06 pm
When I did this thread, I had minutes before read the last message the guy left. It bothered me some. I recognize that I am not at fault. Also that he is probably very young and insecure. I am done with it now.
Rockhead
 
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Reply Thu 23 Oct, 2008 08:14 pm
@edgarblythe,
Nonetheless, I will never post my poetry there again, never ever, dagnabbit...

Shocked

(ya no it weren' treally me, I'm a verse to paragraphs or poetry Wink )
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patiodog
 
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Reply Thu 23 Oct, 2008 08:33 pm
@edgarblythe,
Don't worry, edgar. People online aren't real.
edgarblythe
 
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Reply Thu 23 Oct, 2008 08:58 pm
@patiodog,
I am. I have a hood and a radiator. I ingest gas.
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Reyn
 
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Reply Thu 23 Oct, 2008 09:34 pm
@edgarblythe,
edgarblythe wrote:

When I did this thread, I had minutes before read the last message the guy left. It bothered me some. I recognize that I am not at fault. Also that he is probably very young and insecure. I am done with it now.

I think you're right.

If one puts material out in the public, one must expect that not everyone will like it, much like A2K.

It's too bad he committed suicide by walking in front of your car, but it sounded like it was bound to happen. Wrong place, wrong time.
edgarblythe
 
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Reply Thu 23 Oct, 2008 09:36 pm
@Reyn,
I should have offered to kck his ass.
Reyn
 
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Reply Thu 23 Oct, 2008 09:51 pm
@edgarblythe,
edgarblythe wrote:

I should have offered to kck his ass.

Hey, didn't you tell me that the 7 days aren't over yet?

You have to wait a full 7 days before you can start kicking that sand, mate! Wink Laughing
edgarblythe
 
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Reply Thu 23 Oct, 2008 09:52 pm
@Reyn,
I would only have offered. He would have had to catch me first.
Reyn
 
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Reply Thu 23 Oct, 2008 09:57 pm
@edgarblythe,
Quick on your feet?
edgarblythe
 
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Reply Fri 24 Oct, 2008 04:38 am
@Reyn,
I'm a bit faster than the average centinarian.
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chai2
 
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Reply Fri 24 Oct, 2008 05:03 am
@edgarblythe,
Some people choose to hear what they want to hear.

you very clearly stated (twice) you were only talking about 1 or 2 lines, not the entire thing.

The fact he twice went way overboard in his reaction speaks volumes about him.
edgarblythe
 
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Reply Fri 24 Oct, 2008 05:04 am
@chai2,
I suspect he is very young and insecure.
chai2
 
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Reply Fri 24 Oct, 2008 05:14 am
@edgarblythe,
yes, that's what one of the volumes says.

I don't know that one overcomes insecurity by being told everything you do is golden.

Knowing you edgar, you spoke very diplomatically.

Until he's ready to differentiate between all or nothing, you've done your best.
edgarblythe
 
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Reply Fri 24 Oct, 2008 05:16 am
@chai2,
Yup.
chai2
 
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Reply Fri 24 Oct, 2008 05:33 am
@edgarblythe,
Yup.
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