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Reply Sat 6 Sep, 2003 07:01 pm
Stuck inbetween two worlds
where is my answer?
what must I do?
I've worked both sides of this ever changing world
seen the evil and seen the mirthful moments

The way I ride today is the way I ride forever
Time to mount my Andravida
her allias is choice

The wind wispers in my ear
She tells me my direction
"follow your heart" says that unmistakable intonation
"follow it to the promised land"

Every mind has its own dementions
We all have our place
I am no longer a criminal mind
but I struggle with God's grace.
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Rae
 
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Reply Sat 6 Sep, 2003 07:12 pm
Assuming this is self-motivated, safecracker, why the struggle?
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morganwood
 
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Reply Sat 6 Sep, 2003 08:01 pm
I struggled with a couple of the words. However, given my liberal definitions I see the thought of having walked with the devil and the lord and having felt comfortable in both journeys. At the moment I am more at piece with one but the other still lingers at the back of my mind.

(I hope I've not gone to far astray) I like it!
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Rae
 
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Reply Sat 6 Sep, 2003 08:04 pm
I like it, too.
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safecracker
 
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Reply Sat 6 Sep, 2003 08:44 pm
actually your on target morgan, I guess my point in it all is that everyday is a struggle between what we know is right and power, greed and everything in between. I come from a family full of criminals but I joined the Army, did very well for myself and tried to avoid that life. It is still a ongoing battle to avoid it and stay within my beliefs which I am just now finding in life. Thanks for your kind replys.
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morganwood
 
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Reply Sun 7 Sep, 2003 12:35 am
Been that, done there!
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