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Thu 27 Dec, 2007 04:52 am
I fell as you walked
dreamed as you sleep
choked when you ate
and cried when you laughed
Tall and proud as you were
I saw light from the darkest space
endless dreams and open doors
all slammed shut on deaf ears
To hear the sound
is to feel your pain
to feel you beat in womb
is one to you never the same
I miss you now
shoots of pain in my chest
two too much all ask how
I wait for you
not much gain
I call for you
echoes the same
back to the drawing board on this one . . .
take out half the words.
Honetsty is what I'm looking for here. And you were honest. Thanks.
Hit and miss.