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red wood

 
 
Reply Thu 20 Dec, 2007 04:28 am
Trees will fall
crash them down
Stack them high
Burn them down

Heat my house
I am cold
Raise my kids
I am old

Build my Box
line my bed
stop the war
my friends of red
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Leaka
 
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Reply Thu 20 Dec, 2007 11:50 am
I like this one.
This one is the best out all of them. This one is really good.
You are really making a name for yourself.
I like this one.
Continue improving your skills and maybe you'll get the others ones this good.
Very Happy
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SULLYFISH66
 
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Reply Thu 27 Dec, 2007 08:32 pm
Yes! this is good.

how about as the title: Sequoia??
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garth809
 
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Reply Thu 27 Dec, 2007 11:49 pm
I don't get it? The ones that I think are terrible. Everyone likes... I'll take it . Thank you.
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