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Article 1

Science has proven that the particles that make up the universe around us come from the collapse of a quantum wave. This wave contains possibility and probability and as such doesn’t follow the accepted Newtonian approach to predictability and repeatability. Within the quantum realm nothing is pre-determined and everything is possible. As this wave produces the environment within which we live, it follows that nothing is pre-determined in life and everything is possible.
An extremely interesting fact about the quantum wave is that it doesn’t collapse itself; an external force is required. A third party makes a reality request which forces the quantum wave to produce the desired outcome. A something or someone is required in order to turn the infinite number of possibilities into a single tangible result.
Without this request there remains nothing but opportunities and nothing is real until a request has been made. This fact is extremely important and is vital to understanding how life manifests.
Nothing is predetermined or set in stone. Reality is created not from a random generator but from requests made by a something or someone. There is an enormous amount of stuff going on behind the scenes. There is so much more than what we see and feel.
This something or someone is us! We collapse the quantum wave into what we experience on a daily basis. All of our lives are governed by rules of uncertainly, possibility and probability where anything and everything is possible.
As it is us who tell the quantum wave how to collapse we tell life what to bring us. Outside forces such as other people's opinions and lies can, and do, influence what we ask for but at the lowest level we alone create reality. Although external people or situations affect our choices we have the power of veto. We have the final say. We tell the quantum wave how to collapse so we are the ultimate masters of our own destiny.
This is a massively misunderstood area, which is the reason why the illusion that we have no control exists. This is why we have invented concepts like coincidence, luck and fate. If we want to have then we must embrace this fact by knowing that we can have. Reality follows our lead so we must go first. When we do this we become empowered and we are able to create anything we dream, desire and aspire.
The requests that we make are based upon what we know, or at least believe, to be true. It has always been and always will be this way. External influences only affect our reality when we let them. With a poor understanding of what is actually going on these outside stimuli become very powerful as we do nothing to stop them.
The past and the present reflect what we have asked for and the future is going to be the same.
This is how it is!
Unless we take control of what we ask for we will remain in whatever situation we currently find ourselves in. The quantum wave is happy to provide anything so without a change we will continue to experience more of the same.
If we have not got something we want or have something we don’t then it is because of that is what we are asking for. If there is lack or misery in our life then it is because we are asking for it to be that way. It is when we become confused that we can adopt the wrong attitude and give in.
When we do this then we open ourselves up to a life without any lasting joy, love, freedom or abundance. We mustn’t let despondency or ignorance steal our birth right. We mustn’t let external opinions and lies disguise how reality actually manifests. We mustn’t let confusion collapse the quantum wave as it will almost certainly contain experiences that we won’t like or want.
It can be a massive leap of faith to accept this as fact especially as there are many situations that no one would consciously ask for. However we must never lose sight of the fact that we have asked for everything we experience. The key is that we are not always aware of the requests that we make.
We have, within us, more than one voice that we use to collapse the quantum wave. Only one of them is within our conscious awareness and control. All of the others operate in a covert manner.
Our hidden voices don’t always sing the same tune as the one that we know about. As we have hidden voices it is easy to lose sight of what is possible and often leads to failure. It is easy, when faced with a difficult situation, to think we are alone or are not in control. We can wrongly think that we are unlucky, unworthy or a waste of space. This can feed conditions such as depression or anxiety.
It is only when we start to realise the part that we play in our reality that things can start to change. We become liberated with this understanding that it is possible to turn round any situation no matter how dark things have become.
This is can be a difficult concept to accept, especially when we are up to our necks in lack and misery. Understanding and accepting the fact that we create the situations in which we find ourselves is liberating and must be at the core of any life change. This truth will bring incredible results.
Miracles can happen, that is if we know they can!
Our one and only truth must be that we can have and be anything we dream, desire or aspire.
Joy, love, freedom and abundance are available to all of us, not just the beautiful people on the other side of the tracks.

Article 2
There are many examples in the real world that support the fact that life is a reflection of what we know to be true. Here is an excellent example:
In the early sixties two psychiatrists, Dr. Milan Ryzl and Dr. Vladimir L. Raikov, hypnotised subjects into believing they were living incarnations of historical figures. The subjects developed talents associated with their alter egos. In particular, a subject who was told that she was the artist Raphael took only a month to develop drawing skills up to the standard of an experienced graphic designer.
The hypnosis caused the subjects to change what they knew to be true. As a consequence their reality changed to reflect this new mindset. The subject who was told that she was Raphael didn't manifest a reality based around astrophysics. This is because she knew that Raphael was a painter. If she had been also hypnotised into believing that Raphael was a baker then she would have baked some amazing cakes. The reality she created was based around what she knew to be true about Raphael. There are many other examples of the fact that we get what we know to be true however the definitive one is a man called George Muller. If after reading his story you're not convinced what is possible when you know it is then it will be extremely difficult for you to make any change in your life. We must make George’s story a guiding light.
Born Johann Georg Ferdinand Muller on the 27th September 1805 in Kroppenstaedt, Germany, George came to England and founded the ‘Ashley Down Orphanage’ in Bristol. During his lifetime he cared for over 10,000 orphans. On its own, this is a remarkable achievement however it is trumped by the fact George achieved this without asking a single person for a single penny from anyone. Instead he achieved everything through the use of the fact that we get what we know to be true.
George wasn’t born into privilege and was a troubled child. By the age of 10, George was stealing from his father; at 14 he was gambling and drinking. Realising, that his life wasn’t going anywhere George turned to religion as a way out of the destructive situation that he had found himself in. Though the development of his faith George was able to get a state where he knew every prayer would be answered.
This isn’t a story about religion but instead an example of what is possible when we know it is.
When each child became old enough to leave the orphanage George would pray with them before putting a Bible in their right hand and a coin in their left. He explained to the young person that if they held onto what was in the right hand, God would always make sure there was always something in the left.
Substituting the Truth that we can have and be anything for the bible and the Quantum wave for God we get the same message, which is that it is possible to realise every dream, desire and aspiration. With the truth that we can have and be our left hand will never be without joy, love, freedom and abundance.
One day, the housemother of the orphanage informed George that the children were dressed and ready for school but there is no food for them to eat. George asked her to take the three hundred children into the dining room and have them sit at the tables. He thanked God for the food and waited. George knew God would provide food for the children just as he always did. Within minutes, the regular baker knocked on the door and said that the previous night he couldn’t sleep. Somehow he knew that the orphanage would need bread in the morning. The baker got up and baked three batches of bread, which he had brought with him.
Soon, there was another knock at the door. It was the milkman. His cart had broken down in front of the orphanage. The milk would spoil by the time the wheel was fixed so he asked George if he could use some free milk. George smiled as the milkman brought in ten large cans of milk. There was enough for every one of the thirsty children.
This isn’t a story about coincidence, luck or fluke. This is a story about what is possible when we know it. This is an example of the Truth that we can have and be anything in action. Through his prayers and faith George was able to manifest a reality where three hundred children were fed and watered. George didn’t dip into his savings but instead he exercised the fact that he knew that his request would be realised. This wasn’t a one-off. Events like this happened all the time.
George’s prayer were always answered and as such the needs of the orphanage were met each and every day. Sometimes a wealthy person would send a large amount of money, or a child would give a small amount received for doing chores. Many times food, supplies or money came at the last minute, but George was always provided for without telling anyone about his needs. He just prayed and waited for it to manifest. George made his Truth that he would receive.
Another example of George’s knowing was when a boiler in the orphan house stopped working. It wasn’t an easy fix because the boiler was bricked up and winter was approaching. So George prayed for two things; firstly that the workers he had hired would work throughout the night, and secondly that the weather would hold off.
On the Tuesday before the work was due to start, the weather still wasn’t good but in the morning before the workmen arrived the wind direction changed. With this change came mild weather such that the need to heat the building was reduced. That evening, the workmen’s foreman attended the site to see how things were going. In order to speed things along he instructed the men to report back first thing in the morning to make an early start. Instead the team leader stated that they would prefer to work through the night. Events played out exactly as George had requested.
Another time strong winds caused considerable damage to the roof and the windows of one of the buildings. The normal glazier and roofer had already committed staff to other work so nothing could be done for a week. With the predicted heavy rain and strong winds the damage to the orphanage would have been considerable. After prayer, the wind stopped and no rain fell until most of the damage had been repaired.
George’s life was filled with similar stories because he was someone who not only understood that the Universe provides but also someone who knew how to get it to do his bidding. Like George, we have to take the time to gain the understanding that our dreams, desires and aspirations are available as soon as we embrace the Truth that we can have and be. We must use George’s life as an example of what is possible.
George fed his understanding of the truth by reading the scriptures until he had no doubt that God would provide. The bible was George’s source of understanding, which he feasted upon every single day. Even before he ate his breakfast, George would read several chapters of the gospels. It is even reported that George would read through the entire Bible at least four times a year.
How we gain our understanding of the collapsing quantum wave will be unique. George used religion but that doesn’t mean we have to. It doesn’t matter how we get it as long as we do.
We need to take the lead from George and feast on the truth that we can have and be until we know that the quantum wave will provide everything. We must get to a point where we know beyond any doubt that we will manifest everyone of our dreams, desires and aspirations.