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kerver
 
Reply Wed 26 Nov, 2003 09:31 pm
Things are so much better
When we are fast asleep
No worries, no sounds, feelings of defeat
Dreaming of better places
Where we'd much rather be
It's our only escape from reality
Time keeps dragging on
I haven't slept, it's been so long
I try to break this hopeless chain
but i'm lazy and you rule my brain
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BlueMonkey
 
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Reply Thu 27 Nov, 2003 01:23 am
I like it.

It is true things are much better when we are asleep. I sleep and when I wake up at first I think everything is perfect and great until I regain my waking brain and am reminded of things of evil's past. Perfect is no longer the word for the distortion I encounter.
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Lonely Heart
 
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Reply Sat 29 Nov, 2003 07:13 pm
Kerver i couldn't have said it better, what you wrote is so true. I guess thats why we sleep just to escape reality. Very well written.
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