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Five interesting years

 
 
Reply Thu 13 Nov, 2003 02:33 am
We spent five interesting years of our lives together
Hidden away from the public eye
I know I always made you cry
You confused me so much
I wanted to die
I was your first kiss
I was your first touch
I was the first to see your naked body
beautiful as it was, beautiful as it is
Five interesting years gone by and not a word said about it
we couldn't even talk to eachother, didn't wanna out it
I know you loved me like I love you still
But your afraid of people, you have no will
You got so afraid that you left me behind
But the way you look at me
I am not blind
I still see the love in your eyes
I want the truth, not covered up lies
Tell me at least that you loved me once
And I will leave you alone, no hassles, no grunts
Five interesting years of my life have gone
Cause you were afraid you wouldn't belong
I am now scarred from what we've been through
But I can't show emotion to anyone but you
I can't have it this way
If your gone forever thats fine, ok
But free me from your power
Free me from this pain
Five interesting years still under the chain
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kerver
 
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Reply Fri 14 Nov, 2003 02:33 am
hmm, craziness.
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Lonely Heart
 
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Reply Sat 15 Nov, 2003 12:03 am
wow! that was real good, you have a way with words placing the reader there in your mind experiencing and feeling everything that was felt for one another. i'll hope to read more of your work.
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