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Thu 13 Nov, 2003 02:33 am
We spent five interesting years of our lives together
Hidden away from the public eye
I know I always made you cry
You confused me so much
I wanted to die
I was your first kiss
I was your first touch
I was the first to see your naked body
beautiful as it was, beautiful as it is
Five interesting years gone by and not a word said about it
we couldn't even talk to eachother, didn't wanna out it
I know you loved me like I love you still
But your afraid of people, you have no will
You got so afraid that you left me behind
But the way you look at me
I am not blind
I still see the love in your eyes
I want the truth, not covered up lies
Tell me at least that you loved me once
And I will leave you alone, no hassles, no grunts
Five interesting years of my life have gone
Cause you were afraid you wouldn't belong
I am now scarred from what we've been through
But I can't show emotion to anyone but you
I can't have it this way
If your gone forever thats fine, ok
But free me from your power
Free me from this pain
Five interesting years still under the chain
wow! that was real good, you have a way with words placing the reader there in your mind experiencing and feeling everything that was felt for one another. i'll hope to read more of your work.