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lost time

 
 
srinath
 
Reply Wed 4 Jul, 2007 10:50 am
my days are getting exhausted
but my dreams are not ending,
for the sake of those dreams,
i pray for some more time and space too.
i am overweight but i want to eat more and more,
the pain at the waist just stops me from further
and i curse thee childhood when such tasty eatbles
remained beyond my dreams.
i dream of my reduced weight and eating more and more
sitting on the stairs of the temple and thanking the diety inside.
i dream of going places and trying new and newer dishes
and running in the morning for miles just to eat more and more.
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Chatter
 
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Reply Wed 4 Jul, 2007 01:00 pm
Maybe you should start smoking. Replace one killer habit with another. (just joking) Laughing
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Noddy24
 
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Reply Wed 4 Jul, 2007 01:38 pm
I like the pun:

Quote:
the pain at the waist just stops me
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srinath
 
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Reply Thu 5 Jul, 2007 11:13 am
silent yet violent,
sitting and hitting,
numb and dumb
but cannot divorce.

Enjoy the pain,
darken the world around ,
go for solitude
feeling the comfort of company.
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lostnsearching
 
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Reply Thu 5 Jul, 2007 11:18 am
srinath wrote:
silent yet violent,
sitting and hitting,
numb and dumb
but cannot divorce.

Enjoy the pain,
darken the world around ,
go for solitude
feeling the comfort of company.


envy the ability to be able to do so....
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