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The exquisite necklace

 
 
Jamezun
 
Reply Fri 18 Jul, 2003 09:04 am
The exquisite necklace

A pink little box festooned by a flower
Six transparent petals lay on the fine cover
Securing the necklace until you consider
Put it around your neck and try to remember
Every sparkle of the glistening pink crystal
Representing my lovingness towards your soul
The cross destroys our barriers and we enfold
Sharing all our feelings and be my sweet angel
The two chains will bind us together like a twine
Hope the trait design will change your visceral mind
Back to my side so I will never ever sigh
Be my princess forever till the end of time










Hope she likes it, hope she understands...
Not being loved back is really a tragedy...
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mac11
 
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Reply Thu 7 Aug, 2003 10:26 am
So Jamezun, what happened? Did she like it?
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Jamezun
 
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Reply Thu 7 Aug, 2003 11:20 pm
She said to me,' Thanks James, but don't be too good to me.'

What do you think...
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Eva
 
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Reply Thu 7 Aug, 2003 11:34 pm
She has given you fair warning.
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Jamezun
 
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Reply Fri 8 Aug, 2003 08:17 am
Desperating... Don't even know what to do... Wait? Give up?
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Eva
 
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Reply Fri 8 Aug, 2003 10:57 pm
She is warning you that she is trouble. Believe her.
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Jamezun
 
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Reply Sat 9 Aug, 2003 09:25 am
What do you mean?
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Eva
 
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Reply Sat 9 Aug, 2003 11:44 am
The question is, "What did SHE mean?"

Oftentimes troubled people give out vague warnings like this. It is best not to ignore them.
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Jamezun
 
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Reply Sun 10 Aug, 2003 02:25 am
Can we talk privately? Got an icq? Msn?
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Eva
 
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Reply Sun 10 Aug, 2003 02:49 pm
Send me a pm if you like, but I doubt I have anything more than this to say. I think the girl was warning you that there are problems, she may not even understand them herself. Whatever it is, I would advise you to look for someone happier and more straightforward. Happy people don't make statements like that, and unhappy people tend to make those around them unhappy, too. Wishing you the best.... Eva
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