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Why you are keep eluding

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Jamezun
 
Reply Tue 15 Jul, 2003 09:51 am
Elusion

I'm giving but I'm not receiving
I'm trying but you're hiding
I'm hinting but you're pretending
I'm expressing but you're eluding
I'm telling but you're ignoring
I'm crying but you're laughing










It's stupid when you fall in love with someone who doesn't love youÂ…

I am stupidÂ…
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Rae
 
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Reply Tue 15 Jul, 2003 05:48 pm
Hope you really don't feel that way about yourself, Jamezun.

Keep writing!
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