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j67
 
Reply Sat 21 Apr, 2007 10:23 pm
I wanna stay a while
Sit around
Be with you

Your my hope
And desire
You spark my fire

On bad days
You chase my worries away
And you take away the pain

I wanna stay a while
Just hang around
And listen to you

Your my heart
Your my soul
I hope you never go

Just to hear your voice
It reasures
I'll make it out alive

I wanna stay forever
Just sit around
And watch you move

I was lost
And that I knew it
Then I found you

Take a bullet
It dont matter
I'll be there for you

I'm in your heart
Just to sit around
And hear it beat...
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TTH
 
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Reply Sat 21 Apr, 2007 10:35 pm
What inspires you to write these poems if you don't mind me asking?

I really enjoy reading the ones I have seen you write.
They are very touching emotionally. For me that is rare.
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j67
 
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Reply Sat 21 Apr, 2007 10:44 pm
I really dont now, most of the time ill just be sitting around thinking, and an idea to start a poem will come then i just start to write it down and go from there.

Thanks for the compliments
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TTH
 
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Reply Sat 21 Apr, 2007 10:56 pm
You are very welcome. I look forward to reading more if you post them.
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garth809
 
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Reply Thu 31 May, 2007 01:11 am
This one i like. Very much poignant and nice thxs
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Iwa
 
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Reply Tue 17 Jul, 2007 09:08 pm
it's a lucky thing to find someone who make you rely on him or her so much.touching...
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Tuscany
 
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Reply Sun 12 Aug, 2007 04:29 am
I really like this poem.
I'd love to read more you've written.
You definitely have a gift. Smile
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