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THEIR TOM, HE WAS ONLY A MAN

 
 
Reply Tue 15 Jul, 2003 08:18 am
THEIR TOM, HE WAS ONLY A MAN




Tom was only a man
Only ?
That's what his sister said, grudgingly.
A silly man

He liked his drink
Drunk ?
That's what his wife said, ruefully
A foolish man

He wouldn't hurt a fly
Gentle ?
That's what his mother said, endearingly
A loving man

He had great skills
Great ?
That's what his brother said, respectfully
An heroic man

He had a heart of gold
Genorous ?
That's what his father said, proudly
A big, big man

Tom made his mistake
Got something wrong
But still he was a gifted man
Sharp of mind
Quick of thought
Well respected in his work
A side of him
Few ever saw
The kind of work
done silently
and out of sight
sometimes the pain
sometimes the pleasure
no complaints, just get it done

He was only a man,
An ordinary man
Lived his life day to day
Worked the hours
Earned his pay
Paid his way
Loved his kids
Adored his wife

Looking back, he was different things
to different folk.

His sister said he'll never change
never mend his ways

His wife said he'll never look
never see what needs repair

He likes his fun with his pals
A drink or two, a game of pool
That's his way, his brother said

His father smiled and lightly laughed
His mother tsked, as soft as mud, she muttered

He's my boy, his father said
He's just good fun, his brother said
He's a pain, his sister said
He doesn't think, his good wife said
My son Tom, he's ok his mother said
and life begins at 40

Where's our dad his littlens asked
Shush now please their mother said
I'm so sorry the doctor said
The bullet taken from Tom's head
His badge of rank lay oh the bed
No more nights on lonely streets
Or sweated days on desert sand
No more guns
No more choppers

No more love no more fun

Ashes to ashes, dust to dust,
the preacher said
and angels took Tom by the hand
then led him to the Lord's domain...............................
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Letty
 
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Reply Tue 15 Jul, 2003 09:39 am
Yes, John, only a man, but a MAN who surrendered his life for someone else's cause. Therein lies this honor and to those, such as you, who write so eloquently about it, a salute. You have just paid the most beautiful tribute to a soldier that I have read in some time.
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oldandknew
 
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Reply Tue 15 Jul, 2003 09:45 am
Thank you Letty, that is quite a eulogy you've written
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jjorge
 
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Reply Tue 15 Jul, 2003 10:48 am
Very very nice.
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jackie
 
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Reply Tue 15 Jul, 2003 04:15 pm
Taking a moment to salute you OAK.
This is quite a piece of writing!
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oldandknew
 
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Reply Wed 16 Jul, 2003 06:35 am
Thank you Jackie. Just my reflections on different people that I've merged into one situation. How different people perceive one person in differing lights.
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morganwood
 
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Reply Thu 17 Jul, 2003 08:25 am
Well spoken John! Like it!
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oldandknew
 
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Reply Thu 17 Jul, 2003 12:46 pm
Hi M/W ------- thanks for your words and your appreciation.

how you doing, Letty tells me that you've moved to new area.
hope all is well and things are ok with you
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morganwood
 
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Reply Thu 17 Jul, 2003 02:44 pm
I passed away yesterday. Cause: heatstroke.

Things good. Hoping to move back to the Shenendoah Valley in Virginia. Gotts sell this place first. New shutters, etc. Tennessee summer is death!
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