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Just want to be with you

 
 
j67
 
Reply Sat 21 Apr, 2007 04:27 pm
~Just Want To Be With You~

What do I do
What do I say
Were do I go
I just want to be with you

I look into your eyes
They just mesmerize
And alls I do is stare
At your beautiful locks of hair

When I see you smile
I reconcile
All the memories we had
Some were good and some were bad

Your simple touch
It isn't much
But it rocks my world around
And you don't even make a sound

But in the end
I am just a friend
Trying to earn your satisfaction
Asking for your attraction

This is what I do
This is what i say
This is were I go
I just want to be with you
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Reply Sat 21 Apr, 2007 09:07 pm
The poem is really romantic. Do you write them yourself?
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j67
 
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Reply Sat 21 Apr, 2007 09:19 pm
Yes I do
Yes i write all the poems i post by my self, and thanks for the comment.
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