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Yours Forever

 
 
j67
 
Reply Thu 19 Apr, 2007 07:19 pm
~Yours Forever~

Were do I walk
How do I stare
Should I Talk

What do you say

Should I sit here
Or stand there
I am your car so just steer

I'll do what you say
Every wyhm, and will
I will obey

I am yours forever
And that is what I say

What do you guys think?
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Reply Fri 20 Apr, 2007 10:01 pm
I like it. I like romance and that is what I see in your poem. Short, simple and sweet. I don't normally read them. Once in a while one catches my eye.
I don't know why.
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