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Thu 19 Apr, 2007 06:57 pm
~A New Beginning~
Falling
Falling Fast
Don't Know what to do
Head Is Spinning
Am I going up
Or going down
Faster
Faster
Faster
STOP
A way
An Escape
Quick get it now
FLASH
A bright light
A feeling
A Hope
A New Beginning
I'd like to know what you think about it, its one of my first, and feel free to criticize i want to become better.
I didn't miss this one. I like your poems but, I don't have a background in poetry. I don't intend to make a post on all your poems. I will however read them when I come across them.
I write with a theme. I have a different style. but each is ther own. I like it,yes id do. But as for some critism which i do not like to do. I like to see more of a story or point to poetry. something such as a funny anecdote or observation. Don't get me wrong i like it. And i'm sure plenty of people would wish i'd stop posting but throw it against the wall and see what sticks. As long as you like it. Then who cares what other people think. Keep it up I would love to see more and follow your progress.
Garth