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Wanderer Above the Sea of Fog

 
 
Reply Tue 10 Apr, 2007 05:35 pm
This is for my art history class, I'm supposed to pick a piece of art from the period of Romanticism and do a creative writing piece on it. Any corrections to be made? How do you think it fits the art work I've chosen by Caspar David Friedrich?



Wanderer Above the Sea of Fog

Man above the sea,
The sea of the forgotten.
This sea of fog which conceals,
A hopeless world beneath.
He is no more important,
Perched above the rocks.
He is no closer to any kind of contentment.
He searched for such lofty heights,
In hopes of a better understanding,
And found that such things are not to be had.
How disappointing,
How enraging.
Things are no clearer now,
Than ever they were before.
Yet there is something to be understood,
Something to be sure of there atop the rocks,
Truly one is alone.
The fog makes this clear to the soul,
Through all that it hides from the eyes.
The search for knowledge is for but one man alone.
All will clear in time,
All will be made known,
But only when alone.
Oh so many questions to be answered,
What will the future hold?
Such secrets remain untold to us mere mortals,
We must like the man up on the rocks,
Wait for the fog to clear.
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Reply Tue 10 Apr, 2007 06:05 pm
skeptical, your poem is lovely, but I think we need to know the name of the art by Caspar David Friedrich before deciding.
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skeptical
 
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Reply Tue 10 Apr, 2007 06:26 pm
The title of the poem, is the title of the painting Very Happy
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Letty
 
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Reply Tue 10 Apr, 2007 06:30 pm
Oh, I see. I am not familiar with the painter, but I have done some research concerning him. Do you know how to post a picture of the painting?
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Reply Tue 10 Apr, 2007 06:30 pm
I've been that wanderer..

Your poem gains my interest, I liked it. I've no idea if it will be well received by people who know poetry more intimately than I do.
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Letty
 
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Reply Tue 10 Apr, 2007 06:39 pm
My goodness. I just realized that your highlighted title went right to the painting. Sorry. The painting is awesome and I think your poem reflects it quite well; however, you may want to work on your diction a little.
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skeptical
 
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Reply Wed 11 Apr, 2007 03:06 pm
Thank you Letty. Yes, diction has never been my strong point as far as poetry is concerned, I've already handed the poem in, but may try to go back and fix the diction when I get the time. Oh, and I'm glad that you could relate with the piece ossobuco, that's the most rewarding compliment one can recieve when writing poetry.
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