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one i love

 
 
bretter
 
Reply Thu 29 Mar, 2007 04:16 pm
more than friends
i wanted to be
a month and a half
is all that we see
i tried to be nice
i tried to be your freind
forever i what you had in mind
you hate me now
i still love you
friends is all that we should be
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baseballchic
 
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Reply Thu 29 Mar, 2007 06:20 pm
i totally know how you feel. i just got out of a relationship like that. actually im doing better. just find someone to help mend your heart. trust me it will work out. it did for me and im doing fine now.
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bretter
 
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Reply Fri 30 Mar, 2007 03:14 pm
i dont have many people to go to
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lostnsearching
 
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Reply Fri 30 Mar, 2007 11:54 pm
that's life!!! :wink:
nice poem though.
Quote:
forever i what you had in mind

this line is a little confusing though
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