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Thu 22 Mar, 2007 02:36 pm
There was a young man call Jack
Who always laid low in the pack.
When he proclaimed his uniqueness,
They all saw it as weakness,
And thoughtfully gave him the sack!
shouldn't that be "called Jack"?
Sounds great. A little lack of flow in the 3rd line but sounded cool.
Thanks! I'll attribute the lack of flow to mild intoxication.
contrex - yes it should have been "called" - see above excuse.