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nice poems and ugly answers

 
 
Reply Sat 24 Feb, 2007 09:50 pm
ok first a warning if u have a weak heart dont read cause i dont know wat other ppl and i are capable of doing

second the aim of this thread is to write a poem and the next couple of ppl form there own theories as to wat or how the poem came into existance then when we get bored of the poem someone writes a new one for us

ill start and excuse me but i cant write poems
so ill get one off the net but if ur any good at writing poems please put one in and dont get offended at our replies

The Great Way
The Great Way has no gate;
there are a thousand paths to it.
If you pass through the barrier,
you walk the universe alone.
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Jaden11
 
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Reply Sun 4 Mar, 2007 06:29 am
FOR YOU
SOUL DIGGER


Did you dig deep enough
Deep enough to crack the bones
That were once capable of producing Gold
To sustain the very life
In which your soul has taken throan

Within the flesh the castle wall
The fortress of beautiful lies, and what follows?

If sweet suffering; the harmony of good & evil
The mirror referees. Who is the winner?
"Pretty"? "ugly"?
But from in here deep inside
I know you well.... and you I-even better

Is that what I'v become
Just a reflection of somuch sorrow
That it would sicken even the blind

For feelings are SOMUCH MORE THAN FLESH
Not Equal
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soul collector
 
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Reply Sun 4 Mar, 2007 07:19 pm
ah thats a necrofeliac digging up ur grave :wink:
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Jaden11
 
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Reply Sun 4 Mar, 2007 08:26 pm
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Ahhhhh.....I was hoping u amongst other ppl would help me tear it down? I wasnt refering to my physical grave.
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