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Thu 22 Feb, 2007 10:54 pm
I want to take it all away,
the pain and all the sadness.
So you can have the life you want,
away from all this madness.
I'll do my best to help you through,
I hope my best will be enough.
Just try and stay together,
I know all this is rough.
Could I ease the pain you have,
and give you a new start?
I'll take away your burdens,
and your heavy heart.
Don't wander away,
I'll always be here.
To catch every,
single tear.
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I wish that you would see,
how much I really care.
I'd do anything for you,
take you anywhere.
Can't you see the message hidden in this rhyme?
I hear your voice all day, time after time.
Hoping like everyone says,
maybe you'll love me too.
But why can't you see?
All I want is you.
Can't you see the longing look in my eyes?
You're smile is like 10,000 blue skies.
My love is clear,
My heart is true.
Please understand.
I. Love. You.
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Take my heart,
Take the pain.
Take my love,
So I can be sane.
I'll keep my dreams,
and memories too.
And hide the things,
you never knew.
I'll be your friend,
whenever you're down.
Just never forget,
I'll always be around.
I care more than,
I've cared before.
It's impossible,
to love you more.
So ya.... what do you guys think? You can post your poems 2 :]
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EXTREMELY touchy and VERY inspiring!!!
hope you continue on...