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After Frost

 
 
jjorge
 
Reply Wed 7 Feb, 2007 06:52 pm
After Frost


The soil is lovely moist and deep
where sprightly earthworms plow,
The April rains upon us seep
though we don't feel them now,

No need to laugh, no need to weep,
no feelings, sight, or sound,
and no more promises to keep,
beneath the fertile ground.
-jjorge
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Letty
 
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Reply Thu 8 Feb, 2007 01:55 pm
Well, jjorge, I lost my first response, so this is another attempt.

I really like this poem; it shows that you have not lost your "sight, or sound, or feel" for beauty and the earth.
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jjorge
 
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Reply Thu 8 Feb, 2007 08:26 pm
Thank you Letty, for the kind words.

jjorge
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Letty
 
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Reply Thu 8 Feb, 2007 08:32 pm
Check your PM's punkin' head. Incidentally, I don't say that I like something if it's not what I feel, jjorge
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