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The Edge of a Razor.

 
 
Reply Tue 23 Jan, 2007 09:08 pm
It's the promise or razor blades,
the dreams we've kept hidden away,
and the lives we wish to lead,
the days that passed and the lost time we could have shared.
It's the promise of razor blades that always finds me back here in the dark with these blood stained hands.
These promises are the only thing i've kept true to myself and the razors seem sharper than ever and the cuts they never seem stop.
It's these times when all I needed was just a hand to hold and a heart to call my own and a place to lay my head.
But's it's these razors that I always seem to find, never a heart, never a smile I could hold onto, and a hand to find my own.
These razor blades, these promises i've made, they've cut to deep this time and left a wound to deep to fill myself.
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lostnsearching
 
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Reply Wed 24 Jan, 2007 05:14 am
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very beautifully written...very meaningfull too...
good luck continuing on this journey...
-regards
lns
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RazorBladeKisses
 
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Reply Thu 25 Jan, 2007 09:53 pm
Yeah, thanks alot of the reply. I really would like some feedback, as crazy as that may sound. I need someone to help with errors and the likes. But, I donno. Whatever happens, happens
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Glory
 
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Reply Wed 31 Jan, 2007 10:40 am
Abit emo but nice all the same
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TTH
 
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Reply Mon 19 Feb, 2007 10:12 pm
You said errors. I am not a writer but, what do you mean by that?
Your poem is intense. Almost like it should be believed.
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RazorBladeKisses
 
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Reply Sat 3 Mar, 2007 07:15 pm
Believed? Maybe it should.
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