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No Suspician

 
 
Reply Sun 7 Jan, 2007 07:18 am
I have secretly watched you grow from a child to a beautiful young woman
I have longed for you and wanted you from the very start
I have to convince myself is the right time to set you on the shelf of immortality, and make your existence infinite like a circular wedding band
I love you and always have and I want to give you the gift of eternal youth, see this comes directly from my heart.

Eternity I hand to you on a silver platter
Never again sickness or pain, never growing old
Do not fear me, I want to save you! From me you need not deter
So trust me, never from me should you remain aloof.

Everyone in your family gave me an honor by trusting me
That opened the door so I could be close to you
This way no one would ever suspect anything of me
I could easily sneak you away, and then you getting away from me, my dear, your choices would be very few.

You have grown so quickly like a fast growing climbing vine
Your beauty, I get lightheaded, it actually takes my breath away
So immortality must be yours, eternal youth should be yours, because you are so refined
I gained your trust that way I wouldn't scare you away.

I have tried to convince myself all day long what I am about to do for you is right
I am going to take you away from this awful life of sickness and pain
Sending you to a place that is filled with beautiful bright light
I will release you, and you and your beauty within another domain will forever remain.
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contrex
 
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Reply Sun 7 Jan, 2007 01:04 pm
Don't give up the day job. PS It's "Suspicion" with an 'o'.
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lanaia74
 
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Reply Sun 7 Jan, 2007 03:35 pm
for everyone's information, this is my day job
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contrex
 
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Reply Sun 7 Jan, 2007 04:14 pm
lanaia74 wrote:
for everyone's information, this is my day job


Where do I apply?
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contrex
 
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Reply Sun 7 Jan, 2007 04:15 pm
lanaia74 wrote:
for everyone's information, this is my day job


Where do I apply?
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