Reply Sat 23 Dec, 2006 07:55 pm
we were only seventeen
young free and so naive
i felt like tracey chapman
i didnt know so much would happen
in your car joy riding, high on e
i loved you then, and you loved me
its just i still cant let you go
i dream of the times you made me go ooohh
wish we were there right now
i look in your eyes and youve gone so far
i felt cool in your red shiny car
im back there wrapped in your arms your embrace
yet your jealous when he gets a taste
he dont come close not a race
ive got no heart to waste
take me away from this aching place forever,
im no ho never
its only a dejavou
i love & i hate you
i only wish you knew
he means nowt to me
its just so that you will see
one day i'm gunna tell you just how much you mean to me XXX

jeez loves hard
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Reply Tue 2 Jan, 2007 06:36 pm
Hi mcee fya

I enjoy reading your stuff
happy new year

Endy
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