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The Motel

 
 
Reply Sat 16 Dec, 2006 09:48 am
I accidentally stumbled across this nice little motel
Not knowing that such a nice place would cross my way
So quaint this place, so beautiful with all the lovely detail
This place so delightful I think I will stay for a while.

It's true I've been traveling for quite a while
It didn't dawn on me to get the name of this tranquil place
I was so tired I don't think I could have driven another mile
I stopped here because this place has such a friendly face.

The lovely decor of the room is pink
The color looks as if it's just for me because I'm female
I enter the bathroom and stand at the sink
Thinking to myself this place does possess some kind of dismal hell.

Seeming strange no other rooms rented but mine
I shouldn't be afraid the guy at the front desk was nice
The solitude here is as peaceful as can be
The peaceful serenity here would also you entice.

I stand outside because I want to know where I am
Until I see the name I didn't know I had taken a trip to hell
This place I know now is of the damned
I like to feel over when I saw Bates Motel.
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