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Poem for David's Forty-fifth Birthday

 
 
jjorge
 
Reply Mon 11 Dec, 2006 01:08 pm
Poem for David's Forty-fifth Birthday


For your birthday I could ululate
(don't worry, I will spare you that)
Or on your virtues I might perorate
...even improvise a little scat.


To dance for you, an old soft shoe,
might show you that I think you're keen,
but afterwards my joints might rue,
a too strenuous assertion of esteem.



Now, as I peruse a favorite book,
and ponder on what I should do,
and put it in the bookcase: "Look!
I haven't one copy, but two!"


So here it is,

Aging, but full of wit and wisdom,
-and a little scratch or two,
Come to think of it, this book
is... well...an awful lot like you.
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Letty
 
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Reply Mon 11 Dec, 2006 04:57 pm
I love it, jjorge, but I must confess I had to look up ululate.

Especially like this verse:


"Aging, but full of wit and wisdom,
-and a little scratch or two,
Come to think of it, this book
is... well...an awful lot like you."

So glad to see you back.
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edgarblythe
 
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Reply Mon 11 Dec, 2006 05:40 pm
enjoyed it jjorge
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Tai Chi
 
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Reply Mon 11 Dec, 2006 09:28 pm
That's lovely jjorge.
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jjorge
 
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Reply Mon 11 Dec, 2006 11:45 pm
Hi Miss letty, Edgar, Tai Chi,

Thank you for the kind words.

This is about the seventh or eighth poem I've written for someone.
(not counting a half dozen that I wrote to for an unrequited crush a few years ago)

I found that people are usually quite delighted to have a poem written just for them, and it please me to please them in that way.

This poem is actually the second that I've written to/for my brother David. The first was four years ago ('Letter to my Brother in San Francisco') which I wrote to tell him about the season's first snowstorm.
I published it here on A2K in December of 2002.

Incidentally and FYI the book that I mentioned in the poem is:
'Americans' Favorite Poems: the Favorite Poem Project Anthology'
Robert Pinsky and Maggie Dietz eds.
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ossobuco
 
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Reply Tue 12 Dec, 2006 12:18 am
So glad to see you posting, and, besides, I like the birthday poem. Just right, at point.
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the prince
 
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Reply Tue 12 Dec, 2006 03:29 am
Fab !! and it is soooooooo good to see you back !
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jjorge
 
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Reply Tue 12 Dec, 2006 08:02 am
My, my, my! How delightful it is to see you ALL!

.... and now osso!
(did you get to ABQ osso?)

and the handsome prince!

unfaithful wandering Gemini that I am,
I don't deserve you. (sniff)
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