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'Encounter'

 
 
jjorge
 
Reply Sat 2 Dec, 2006 12:55 am
Encounter


Above the early morning fog
I hear a single songbird peep,
though, but for me she'd be unheard,
-the mountain coves are still asleep,


Then, through a rhododendron bush
a tawny forest beauty glides,
and seeming not to move one leaf
to taste the dewy grass she spies


She turns, and bends her slender neck,
then stops. -I made a tiny sound-
her eyes and twitching ears she lifts,
our gazes meet and my heart pounds,


her glance is cooler than the mist,
and though the stranger stands so near,
She waits, and lets me stare and stare,
(She seems to be devoid of fear)


and like a runway manequin
she waits to let me have my fill,
then turns, walks through a leafy screen,
and as before, the woods are still.

-jjorge
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Phoenix32890
 
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Reply Sat 2 Dec, 2006 06:19 am
jjorge- Hi! Glad to see that you are back! Very Happy
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Endymion
 
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Reply Wed 6 Dec, 2006 10:32 pm
I like your poem, jjorge
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edgarblythe
 
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Reply Wed 6 Dec, 2006 10:57 pm
jjorge
Hi, old friend. The poem's a masterpiece.
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jjorge
 
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Reply Thu 7 Dec, 2006 07:42 pm
Hi Phoenix, ENDYMION, Edgar,

Nice to see you all!

I'm now perched on a mountain in the Blue Ridge and getting accustomed to rural life. Sometimes I think God made this place too beautiful! * (apologies to ESVM)

and...I got here in time to help elect Jim Webb to the U.S. Senate.

Hope you are all well and happy!

see you on the threads.

jjorge ~(:-)


* a little cold at the moment though... 14 degrees farenheit @ 8:30pm with windspeed of 25mph!
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Piffka
 
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Reply Tue 12 Dec, 2006 09:47 am
Jjorge!! Jjurray~! Jjugs around!@!!!!

S'true, that's a masterpiece. I'm in awe, as usual.

(... let me have my fill) brought tears to my eyes.



Congrats on Jim Webb. <basking>
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jjorge
 
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Reply Tue 12 Dec, 2006 10:21 am
Piffka, Piffka, Piffka!

'Dichosos los ojos que la ven'.*









* happy are the eyes that 'see' her
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Piffka
 
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Reply Wed 13 Dec, 2006 11:39 pm
<grinning>

Oooh, I love that. Happy are these eyes that get to read your poems and see your photos. Where are the inflicta-pic emails I've been waiting for?

Has it turned out to be cooler in the wilds of Virginny than you expected?
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jjorge
 
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Reply Fri 15 Dec, 2006 06:32 am
Hi Pif

I'll be back at ya later...

very hectic couple of days...lots to tell....
gotta run (drive actually) down the mountain to my friend's house to help him cut his Winter firewood supply....more later... jj
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