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Reply Thu 19 Jun, 2003 11:20 pm
Its so hard denieing these feelings
knowing deeop inside that i feel this way
it scares me, makes me wonder
that even though you're miles away
my mind remains on you
and whatever doubts decide to cross my mind
i know that you fell and feel this too

its strange how we rarely speak
yet on those late nights i hear everything you say
hearing your words in my mind are comforting
knowing you still care places me through day
Who would've thought you'd be all i miss
when we are yet to meet face to face
and strangely only you have me like this.
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Reply Thu 19 Jun, 2003 11:23 pm
Change this verse; "knowing you still care places me through day."
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