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At the Insection of Time and Space

 
 
Reply Sun 12 Nov, 2006 05:35 pm
In order
to be
at the restaurant
on time
I have invoked
a time travel mojo
on this taxicab
...
It's working

working

changing
red lights to green lights
removing
tottering doddering
pottering
pedestrians
from the corners
from the avenues
from the earth

rolling back
minutes
as the miles and the meter
roll up

if
now

right now

I am only ten minutes late
I am on time


in New York City
ten minutes
is only
ten minutes

twenty minutes
is
late

unless
I call the table
to say
I am in a taxi

a taxi


a well known
time machine
http://photos1.blogger.com/blogger2/6051/370/320/Neon%20Taxi.jpg

Joe(dead as a doornail)Nation
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edgarblythe
 
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Reply Sun 12 Nov, 2006 05:40 pm
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Betsy: You know what you remind me of?
Travis Bickle: What?
Betsy: That song by Kris Kristofferson.
Travis Bickle: Who's that?
Betsy: A songwriter. 'He's a prophet... he's a prophet and a pusher, partly truth, partly fiction. A walking contradiction.'
Travis Bickle: [uneasily] You sayin' that about me?
Betsy: Who else would I be talkin' about?
Travis Bickle: I'm no pusher. I never have pushed.
Betsy: No, no. Just the part about the contradictions. You are that.
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Joe Nation
 
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Reply Sun 12 Nov, 2006 05:43 pm
Thank you, I think.

Joe(shutting the lid on the coffin)Nation
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dadpad
 
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Reply Sun 12 Nov, 2006 05:54 pm
A pheonix rises from the ashes!
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Letty
 
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Reply Sun 12 Nov, 2006 05:55 pm
Joe, Welcome back. Is that an urn I see before me? Your writing is just odd enough to be captivating, buddy.
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ossobuco
 
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Reply Sun 12 Nov, 2006 06:05 pm
Makes me miss my Kristofferson album..

signed,

Jo (have always loved his writing - Nation, but also Blythe) O'Buco
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gustavratzenhofer
 
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Reply Sun 12 Nov, 2006 06:37 pm
Nice little piece of work there, Joe.
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Joe Nation
 
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Reply Sun 12 Nov, 2006 09:30 pm
thanks y'all.

Joe WindowNation
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edgarblythe
 
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Reply Sun 12 Nov, 2006 09:36 pm
Insection \In*sec"tion\, n. [See Insect.]
A cutting in; incisure; incision.
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