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Everything's ok

 
 
stuh505
 
Reply Fri 10 Nov, 2006 01:06 am
You only care when there is hope;
when you're clinging on to something.
Your fingers slipping, afraid to fall--
and then there's the fear.
But the fear, it doesn't last long,
because the end is upon you.
And then it's alright.
Everything's okay.
Your mind is finally freed.
Your worries laid to rest.
As your eyes pan across
your immobile chest,
the world seems so far away.
All the pain should be there,
but is taken away.
Above you only sky,
now you see it's beautiful
and you know
it's time to die.
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lanaia74
 
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Reply Mon 13 Nov, 2006 04:45 am
VERY well done!
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