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Wed 8 Nov, 2006 11:08 am
I can't believe you chartered a boat to celebrate my birthday
We set sail today from Florida headed toward Bermuda's way
This will give us plenty of time to get some sun and play
Little did we know later on we will wish we had stayed away.
I'd say we were about half way to our destination, when a mysterious fog bank appears
All the instruments on the boat are going nuts
We stop the engine hoping to avoid going into the fog
We have no idea what's going on, and ti get through this will take a lot of guts.
Stopping the engine makes the boat slow a bit
The fog seems to be glowing in a way, by something strange it seems to be lit.
Oh my gosh! From this strange thing, we must get away
The illumination seems to be glowing, I have never seen anything like this strange fog.
We try and read our compass, but no use the thing is going hay wire
We would like to know the direction we are going, but there seems to be no way
I do wish this would stop, as I am very tired and would really like to retire
But from this crazy situation, it seems no one can stray.
It seems that we are going to enter the fog bank
I really wish I knew where we were
We are coming closer to the illuminating fog bank
Seems like we are going to go straight in, from this strange thing there is no way to deter.
lanaia74
I hope you enjoy your experience here. Your writing is very effective in bringing some of my 'seemingly unsolvable' mysteries to the surface of my mind.
I cannot find the way from some mazes , either.
However, worse than entering fog, it feels more like being chloroformed,
while awake, and forced to endure the procedure in horror.
Are you serious in a good way or a bad way?
I am just serious.
However, thinking of being tortured is kinda BAD, doncha think?
I like your writing...pretty good.
I agree and thank you for your kind words!
Hugs,
Lanaia