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From Your Catherine

 
 
Reply Tue 7 Nov, 2006 04:53 pm
Just wanted to know what you guys thought of this one. It is about a mental breakdown and how that dissolved a good relationship.


"From your Catherine"

Just so you know…
I hated Wuthering Heights.
Catherine was weak willed,
Pushy,
Arrogant,
And easily hurt.
Just like me.
Just so you know,
I know why you stopped loving me…
I am too much like your Catherine Linton,
Whom you simultaneously
Love
And
Abhor!

©DanielleJean
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Endymion
 
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Reply Tue 7 Nov, 2006 05:01 pm
If it was mine, I'd throw out the eighth line
but other than that i liked it very much
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sozobe
 
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Reply Tue 7 Nov, 2006 05:03 pm
Nice idea. And the final exclamation point takes it (ironically or not) into the same overheated realm as the novel. I like that it's brief and doesn't milk the idea too much.
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