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Down With Eternal Optimism

 
 
AngieP
 
Reply Sun 5 Nov, 2006 11:36 pm
Down with Eternal Optimism -
Feels so good just watching it burn.
Embrace with relief the bitch that I am,
Kiss at the flame for which I so yearn.

Far, far too long on this fraudulent road,
with it's encouraging pats and bright hopeful eyes.
Plastic assurance of rose colored joy -
It's a route straight down to my own demise.

So hard to admit that life's hell and you know it
When you're programmed to try and find beauty in ****.

So scared to let your true self glare right through -
All those simpletons just won't know what to do.

Completely appropriate to strip down to just me -
Flaunt all of my secrets I've learned to suppress.
Bask in the freedom indifference allows.
Indiscreet valor I now seek to caress.

When a rage comes upon me, I'll open the door!
Let the curses flow freely, a fit brings release.
Allow selfishness finally to come out on top -
A guaranteed route to that rare inner peace.
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aidan
 
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Reply Mon 6 Nov, 2006 02:36 am
Laughing Now that's a feeling I can relate to!

Great subject for a poem.

Except I don't believe we're programmed to find beauty in ****. In my experience it's the opposite-we programmed to see beauty in perfection and overlook it in it's less obvious forms.

Unless you're talking about popular culture...than that's true for sure.
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AngieP
 
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Reply Mon 6 Nov, 2006 10:16 am
By the line about finding beauty in ****: I was only meaning that we are quite often expected to only see the good that life has to offer - that was the focus of this poem - me complaining that I hate always having to be so optimistic!

That comment about popular culture - so true!
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