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part of me ..one of my old poems

 
 
Reply Thu 2 Nov, 2006 01:37 pm
Part of me, belongs to you
part of you lives and grows in me.
I don't know if I would have become the person that i am to you
without you in my life. Every conversation, every crisis
every tear brings us closer; every argument, every disagreement
every fight makes us lose a little bit more to each other.

I swear to always be very close, even if most times I am out of reach
I love you a lot, so much that it scares me. There is a kind of awkward honesty
which exists between us that goes beyond mere mortal friendship.
A particular kind spoken of in legends and dreams;
you are my love, my goddess, my sadness, my joy.

You make me write when no one else can...
this is just another poem written in my heart for you.
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Raener
 
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Reply Mon 6 Nov, 2006 03:57 pm
Very Happy Nice work. Romantic.
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SusanWilliams69
 
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Reply Tue 7 Nov, 2006 12:59 pm
Why thank you so much , I shall become inspired once more sometime in the near future I hope Smile
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