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Reflections speak.....

 
 
LEENA
 
Reply Tue 17 Oct, 2006 10:56 am
Hi
This section will contain poems and compositions related to more open matters rather than poems on someone's secret fears or fantasies.
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Reflections speak, alot indeed
but they may not speak the truth

We need to go a little farther
and prob the secrets that lie within

LEENA
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LEENA
 
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Reply Tue 17 Oct, 2006 11:14 am
HISTORY


What is history; do you know?
It is a story, myth and lore...
Half is told while half is sold
in anonymous layers of multiple-folds...
then it is re-told!

The story revolves around how humans evolve....
each chapter with its unique spectrum of
colors and sounds and those deep wounds
that humans engraved upon human skin....
again and again....and again!

It is a Universal Law of profound action
eventually followed by an extreme reaction
with huge amount of bubbles and gas
and a significant layer of crusted salt....
whose fault?

Each set of experiments has its own name
The Egyptian Era of the Merciless Pharaoh
The struggle for Independence in various lands
but the chains are bound and locked around
one cause....survival!

So to effectively comprehend this ancient lore
each aspect and facet we have to explore
the pros and cons to balance the scales
of the ceaseless, continuous, treacherous circle....
of history.


LEENA
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LEENA
 
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Reply Tue 24 Jul, 2007 05:24 pm
UNTITLED

They're all just strangers
No more to me
But then why do their words
stir me from deep inside?
Why does the music make me drowsy
why does it make me drown?
Completely down into a pool of emotion
where I can escape from all the commotion
They're all just strangers
No more can they be
Then why do I feel
understood?

LEENA
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Endymion
 
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Reply Fri 27 Jul, 2007 10:41 pm
i like this last one
I try writing poetry that's more abstract - but it always goes back to being more like a 'story'
I like the way yours are about feelings
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LEENA
 
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Reply Sun 29 Jul, 2007 05:24 pm
It's been a long time since I've heard from you Endy but I believe that I don't have a right to complain as I have also been away for a long time, and only periodically dropping in.

Anyways, it's pleasant to hear this from you.
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I try writing poetry that's more abstract - but it always goes back to being more like a 'story'


And that's exactly what's envious about your poems, no kidding.
They have an intensity in them that I have never really found in any other writer's words......especially the one you wrote about the kid living on the street -- the third one on your People's thread.

Keep writing.
Later Smile
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Endymion
 
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Reply Mon 30 Jul, 2007 08:04 am
you keep writing too - and thanks
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