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Tears of the Teddy Bear

 
 
Reply Mon 16 Oct, 2006 08:45 pm
she does not hold her hand
but girl does not understand
why she has let go
along time ago
and why her mommy never came back
how this small childs lacks
from her mommy she will miss
her mothers sweet warm kiss
that used to light up the childs day
but now her mother dismisses her away
the small child left behind
with her teddy bear intwined
in her small fingers
her mothers scent lingers
in the air
which the girl is unaware
of her mommys actions.
the different reactions
of her mother good bye
made the girls teddy bear cry
for he was aware
of the dispair
when the mother was to leave
snd the mother made the small girl let go of her sleeve
she walked out of her and the teddys life
that her mother was the cause of the grief and strife
she held on the the bear
with the tender loving care
that she herself
had not felt.
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Endymion
 
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Reply Tue 17 Oct, 2006 06:08 pm
I too had a bear I cherished once and believed that I could smell my unknown mother in his fur
Your poem brought that smell back to me for a few seconds

Keep writing

Peace,
Endy
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seibentage
 
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Reply Tue 17 Oct, 2006 07:22 pm
Quote:
I too had a bear I cherished once and believed that I could smell my unknown mother in his fur
Your poem brought that smell back to me for a few seconds



is that a good or bad thing?
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sozobe
 
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Reply Tue 17 Oct, 2006 08:23 pm
I think your title would be a great name for a band...
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Endymion
 
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Reply Tue 17 Oct, 2006 08:33 pm
seibentage wrote:


is that a good or bad thing?


Both, I guess - nostalga, memory, you know....
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seibentage
 
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Reply Wed 18 Oct, 2006 05:18 pm
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I think your title would be a great name for a band...


lol let me break out my old guitar, and get this started
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seibentage
 
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Reply Wed 18 Oct, 2006 05:19 pm
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Both, I guess - nostalga, memory, you know....


i understand.....
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