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Life and time

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Jamezun
 
Reply Mon 16 Oct, 2006 08:45 am
Life and time
Pink sky shades with crying sun
Time is bitten one by one
No matter what we have done
Fate has told us not to run
The unwitting sense of gun
Brings away our life to none
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lostnsearching
 
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Reply Mon 16 Oct, 2006 09:14 am
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very well written, great and agreed upon. time really has 'bitten us one by one'
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No matter what we have done
Fate has told us not to run


doesn't it seem like we're trapped? but aren't we really trapped?
dude: what does this mean to you, i'm getting curious- it's soo great!
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lostnsearching
 
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Reply Mon 16 Oct, 2006 09:25 am
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pssst...can we save us??? Confused
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