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Final serenda

 
 
Reply Tue 26 Sep, 2006 07:38 am
Here I lay upon my dieing bed
Sweat beading down my face,
It's my last chance to see you again.
For I know this is my last night
So hold me close for this is it
One final chance at a perfect kiss
Hold me close and watch the stars
Drift from my eyes,
But always know I'll be there.
Hold my hand one last time
As I drift off to the abyss/
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Reply Wed 11 Oct, 2006 11:15 am
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it's good..very good...reminds me of some previous memories...(also titanic LOL)
keep writing....
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