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Mon 25 Sep, 2006 03:32 pm
HELP!
Started my first novel earlier this year and, unfortunately, I appear to have made one major mistake that now has me unsure of how to proceed. Although I did more than my share of research regarding the various subjects included in my novel, I jumped right into the actual writing without referring to any "How To" books. I had a moderate amount of experience writing non-fiction magazine articles and thought I had a basic understanding of "How To Write." Big mistakeĀ
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For discussion purposes, I'll classify my novel as half murder mystery and half political thriller. It's written from the murderer's point of view, so there's not much mystery concerning who committed the murder, but other plot twists supply the mystery element.
The first hundred or so pages literally flew off my fingers and onto the screen. And then, after about three months, I spent an afternoon wandering through bookstores, paging through "Novel Writing for Dummies" type books and even purchased a book specific to the mystery novel genre.
Every single book listed one topic as either the first or second most important skill for novel writers: writing convincing dialogue. My first 100+/- pages contained exactly zero lines of dialogue. Oops!
In a panic I started flipping through all of those books again looking for info on writing w/ minimal dialogue; but few even mentioned the concept. Finally I found a couple of books that discussed the issue and they both offered up the same conclusion: writing with minimal dialogue was very popular prior to around 1930 or so. But since then, anyone wishing to hold onto a reader must write with a ?'scene based framework' consisting mainly of dialogue. They referred to my narrative style as ?'lecturing the reader' and firmly stated that no one publishes that sort of fiction any more. Aaarrrggh!
Right now I'm torn between two possible solutions. Re-writing the first 100 or so pages in ?'scene based format' or keeping what I have and inserting dialogue heavy chapters in between each pair of narrative chapters; ending up with an alternating style of dialogue / narrative / dialogue / narrative throughout the book.
For what its worth, writing dialogue has come easy now that I understand it to be important, and the second 100 or so pages read similarly to any book I pick up in the mystery section of the local bookstore. But I'm going to have a much harder time with the first section of the book where I explain so much about what has the murderer all worked up, and why he thinks murder is a practical solution to his current situation. Some things just don't come up in everyday conversation and it sounds ridiculous when I try to force it into that format. But I do wish I had spent an hour flipping through "How to Write a Fiction Novel" type books before I got startedĀ
Yes, that's right. I remember when I used to read novels; when the author went on too long without any dialouges I found myself drifting away and getting 'really' bored.
Plus, a chapter without dialouges and another loaded with dialouges and on and on........not very effective, no.
I think you'd have to write it again.
Hope it helps.
LEENA
Unfortunately your first hundred pages are very important in convincing a reader that your book is worth reading.
I appreciate right now that revision sounds like a lot of work to you, but you can't expect hundreds of thousands of readers to wade through 100 dull pages before you show the story-telling craft you've learned.
If you want readers, you have to cater to readers.
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well it depends on the kinda audience you're aiming at. but there is a huge majority of readers who basically only read dialogues and skip the rest of the text...so you might loose their interest if your first books first 100+ pages contain no dialogues. (sometimes i also fall in this category)
you said that your story is a murder+politics based... your main audience seems to be young adults and teenagers_ who are VERY concience about dialogues.
so... it's up to you...
I agree...it is up to you. However, to keep the momentum of the story going, the entire thing needs to be written in the same format. Meaning: if you have the first hundred pages written as narrative/dialogue/narrative, you need to have the whole thing like that. You can't just all of a sudden change the format of the 2nd hundred pages to have sporatic dialogue. Otherwise you're going to confuse your readers. And that's not a good thing to do.