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How do I Change

 
 
Reply Wed 20 Sep, 2006 05:43 pm
How do I change my ways?
From living all the same
For my thoughts
Are forever chasing the first time
So here I am Asking myself why?
For I have see to much vanilla
The past has left me blind
Got me asking
How do I rid myself from this pain??
Or is it my inner voice asking for a change
Forever pleading with me
It's the addiction
That keeps me
Have To take an pull
Feeling overwhelmed by the whole issue
And here I am in desperate need of a tissue
As I make a big fuss
While holding my Dutch?
My eyes rain
Finally realizing why I feel this way
For it is me, not being able to see
That I have been holding myself back
So I won't experience change taking place
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Reply Wed 20 Sep, 2006 07:17 pm
dog4life.....beautiful! Very interesting use of wording. You have invited mystery to tempt at speculation and enquiry to tease at reason.

One day at a time
Forever within rhyme
Only once is a first time
All pursuance seems a crime

Vanilla is not to be seen as much
As it is to be tasted or touched
Change is not painful, too much
As long as the past is not clutched

Sorry.....your poem kinda reached in and invited me to play in the creative zone. This is not an attempt to outdo you at all....I was joining you and trying to express an answer.....because your poem did in fact ask a question.

keep writing.... Smile
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dog4life
 
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Reply Thu 21 Sep, 2006 12:11 pm
thanks. I sort of reached in the inner voice. but you have pretty good wording yourself.

Inner voice
reaching out
For it knows
what it talking about
WHile I sit here
ignoring what's real
It sees
what has to be sealed
as i sit here
not asking to feel
Asking what the big deal
It nothing wrong with me
It the images I see
while i hear my favorite cd
But in my seat
So i won't have to moved from the tv
Exactly my inner voice says
don't you want to see the truth
For it is very real
That you must change
And that date must be today

A little freestyle i Thought up It seems as if a second part.
Maybe I should found a way to incorperare this. What you think?
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