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how long shall i breathe?

 
 
rayray
 
Reply Sat 7 Jun, 2003 11:37 am
on the run in the morning so free//

terrified and mourning that i'd never be me//

having thoughts of never doing more again, but i wont suceed//

because i've been in that posistion before and i'm always found wanting//

if i tell me i luv me, will i finally see?//

and if i even pretend to treat me as i luv me//

how long shall i breathe?//
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Reply Tue 10 Jun, 2003 11:47 pm
hey nice and beautiful nice but to short thats the only thing that bothered me.
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Reply Wed 11 Jun, 2003 10:47 am
thanx for the positive reply misterEthoughts. i'm glad u liked it. sorry that its kinda short, but i kinda like when i can get the point across in so few words. i've posted plenty of other long ones if u get a chance to read 'em. later
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