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diE anothEr day

 
 
rayray
 
Reply Fri 6 Jun, 2003 03:41 pm
on a day when the moon is warm and the sun is strange//
the dusken sky is illumine, tinted red from a blaze//
solemnly i submit myself into this war we wage//
of mushroom clouds, impure air and never ending days//
homesickness set in early wish i could whisk the time away//
but aware that any moment i could expire, i pray i die another day//
i long for the beauty of my city, as emerald as it is//
and long for the future that awaits me, and all its strangeness//
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rayray
 
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Reply Fri 6 Jun, 2003 09:30 pm
bumP
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cicerone imposter
 
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Reply Fri 6 Jun, 2003 11:05 pm
rayray, I can tell you one thing: you keep spelling your words with mixed capital letters, and I'll never look at any more of your posts. c.i.
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roger
 
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Reply Sat 7 Jun, 2003 08:56 am
Very true. I've seen several of these, and only looked at this one because c.i. was the last respondent.

bump don't work
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rayray
 
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Reply Sat 7 Jun, 2003 11:32 am
thanx see.I and to your lille groupiE.
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