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wrote this when i was 10, what ya think?

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mcee fya
 
Reply Thu 7 Sep, 2006 08:43 pm
art of beauty, art of shame,
art of what could be, became,
art of a summer flower showing off its hearts desires,
art of the shining sun making out what has become
art of the stars which sparkle in my moonlit sky
which come to live and came to die

i wrote it for my mum she's still got this in a frame on her wall
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Merry Andrew
 
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Reply Thu 7 Sep, 2006 08:48 pm
For a 10-year-old, it's quite good.
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mcee fya
 
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Reply Thu 7 Sep, 2006 08:50 pm
thx Very Happy
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golf97
 
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Reply Wed 13 Sep, 2006 08:22 pm
pretty sweet for any years old.
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