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The Hunger

 
 
Reply Tue 3 Jun, 2003 05:34 pm
The Hunger

To what have I opened my heart?
What desirous creature is this?
The balance of destiny,now in question
Emotions and logic,a tangled abyss

Each moment without vision,
I will conjure its ravenous need
And mold it to my own hungry soul
To let it watch me bleed

I would die a thousand deaths,
To feel these embers burning
My insatiable heart won't rest
With its need to succumb to the yearning

Masquerading all rationale,
This creature does ravage my soul
Will time stand still to permit,
This insistent craving that makes me whole?

D.M.Higgins
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Reply Sat 30 Aug, 2003 04:19 pm
Awesome! I really like the last line. Craving is underrated.
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