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I do not write for words alone

 
 
Letty
 
Reply Sun 1 Jun, 2003 12:57 pm
I do not write for words alone,
Nor do I sing for just the song.

I do not feel for merely touch
or use a rainbow as a crutch
To limp upon.

But you with eyes that look inside
With crinkled corners, sometimes
Hide the film that covers having cried
The time that's gone.

Sometimes we sit on wounded wood.
A splinter works it way toward good
and festers in the skin beneath
And to that scar I do bequeath
this poem.
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Booman
 
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Reply Sun 1 Jun, 2003 01:09 pm
AUTHOR!...AUTHOR!..... Exclamation ...Take a bow....

....Is it no wonder, I call you "Letty Of The Lyrics?"

You got skills, Girl! Cool
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Letty
 
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Reply Sun 1 Jun, 2003 01:13 pm
ah,Boo who wrote the book of love and then edited it. Smile

Thanks, Yank. Razz
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Vivien
 
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Reply Sun 1 Jun, 2003 02:19 pm
loved it
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Letty
 
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Reply Sun 1 Jun, 2003 02:25 pm
Viv, coming from an artist such as you, I am especially grateful. Thank you.
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Rae
 
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Reply Sun 1 Jun, 2003 02:27 pm
Lovely, Miss Letty. <smooches>
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Letty
 
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Reply Sun 1 Jun, 2003 02:31 pm
ah, Rae. You dear child. Thank you for both. Hey, I'm gonna write a poem about a pool shark and dedicate it to some people I saw in Cocoa Beach Cool
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Rae
 
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Reply Sun 1 Jun, 2003 02:33 pm
Wish I could dig up some inspiration to start writing again. Actually went out and bought a notebook for just this purpose today. We'll see.

A pool shark? Ohmygoodness..... Rolling Eyes
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Tex-Star
 
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Reply Sun 1 Jun, 2003 02:45 pm
Good work, Letty, some feeling in that poem. Where else can we say so much in so few words, but poetry. I should write again, too.
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oldandknew
 
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Reply Sun 1 Jun, 2003 02:46 pm
Letty, very sharp and full of vision. Now the person you write about will be proud of you.


Rae, you just think of a word, location, subject, and you just write. Well that's how I do it.
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Rae
 
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Reply Sun 1 Jun, 2003 02:47 pm
John ~ buying the notebook was at least a step in the 'write' direction.....
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Letty
 
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Reply Sun 1 Jun, 2003 02:49 pm
Tex, Wow! It's been a while since we interacted. Write..write..write. Yes, all kinds of stuff is in that poem. I hope you like it.
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Letty
 
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Reply Sun 1 Jun, 2003 02:55 pm
Welllll, John. I would have chosen another word other than "proud", but that will suffice. Thank you. and again, from one poet to another, and from the top of the head, we need to see more from you. Cool

Now let's all revive beauty from among the trenches
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Booman
 
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Reply Sun 1 Jun, 2003 03:07 pm
I see others may be in the boat I'm in. I bought a notebook for "the great American novel", over a year ago. I started scribbling notes a few months ago. Embarrassed Rae, I hope you move at a faster pace, than me. :wink:
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Raggedyaggie
 
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Reply Sun 1 Jun, 2003 03:18 pm
Ah, Letty, your poem is so lovely. You are indeed a person who knows and loves beauty.
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jackie
 
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Reply Sun 1 Jun, 2003 03:27 pm
SIMPLY PUT, "you said it all, Letty."
How it does NOT surprise me, that you are cognizant of all poetic reason, while smarting from the eternal "splinter fever" yourself!


I love it. And I will copy it to my favorites, WITH YOUR CREDITS always.
I hope you will continue to be inspired for a long LONG time.
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Letty
 
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Reply Sun 1 Jun, 2003 05:46 pm
My dear friends--the ones that I have met in the world of the mind..in the walks of the manatee Smile

Even to the movers and shakers, there is a tiny bit of redemption. They keep us off balance just enough to keep us determined.

Someone once told me that the song "Help Me Make it Through the Night" was really a simple but beautiful philosophy...:

Help Me Make It Through The Night- Kris Kristofferson

Take the ribbon from your hair, Shake it loose and let it fall,
Layin' soft upon my skin. Like the shadows on the wall.
Come and lay down by my side till the early morning light
All I'm takin' is your time. Help me make it through the night.

I don't care what's right or wrong, I don't try to understand.
Let the devil take tomorrow. Lord, tonight I need a friend.

Yesterday is dead and gone and tomorrow's out of sight.
And it's sad to be alone. Help me make it through the night.

I don't care what's right or wrong, (Yes, I do !)
I don't try to understand.
Let the devil take tomorrow. Lord, tonight I need a friend.

Yesterday is dead and gone and tomorrow's out of sight.
Lord, it's bad to be alone. Help me make it through the night.
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Rae
 
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Reply Sun 1 Jun, 2003 05:55 pm
Yesterday is dead and gone and tomorrow is out of sight.

Amen.
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Raggedyaggie
 
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Reply Sun 1 Jun, 2003 07:13 pm
Letty and Rae: After reading your threads, I played a favorite Joan Baez recording. A song written by Willie Nelson. I wonder if Kris wrote his song before Willie's. (I'll have to check that out)

I live one day at a time.
I dream one dream at a time.
Yesterday's dead and tomorrow is blind
And I live one day at a time.

Then, you're surprised to see me back at home.
You don't know how much I miss you when you're gone.
Don't ask how long I plan to stay,
It never crossed my mind
Cause I live one day at a time.

There's a swallow flying cross a cloudy sky
Searching for a patch of sun, so am I.
Don't ask how long I plan to follow him
Perhaps, I won't in time
Cause I live one day at a time.
I dream one dream at a time.

It echoes heartache, doesn't it ,and yet ,Willie is quoted as having said: I take it not only a day at a time, but a moment at a time. If you can be happy right now, then you'll always be happy because it's always in the NOW."

That's a tough road to follow, but it is worth a try, because isn't it true that if we're stuck in the past or lost in the future, we'll totally miss the excitement of the NOW? I have a feeling that that's what you're telling us Letty. Smile
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Letty
 
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Reply Sun 1 Jun, 2003 07:28 pm
Yes, Raggedy. In the telling of it, it becomes yours. Morganwood had the most beautiful thread about Zack. Everyone needs to look at it...he's telling us:

http://www.able2know.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=8035&highlight=

What a wonderful honesty.
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