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my story idea - any good?

 
 
Reply Tue 15 Aug, 2006 11:27 am
Hi Very Happy

This is my first post, so be gentle!

Basically this is the idea for my novel:

Young boy has got a gift for English, reads magazines. Freelances for a small magazine, struggles to get regular spots due to age and everyone else being more experienced than him. Almost gives up, but fights on and manages to land a job on the same magazine he bought years ago, works his way up. Manages to get the job of Editor and on that same day he's promoted he's involved in a road traffic accident. He dies realising his dream - how many people die not realising their dream? In the end doens't realise how lucky he is.

What do we think guys? It's kind of Autobiographical, as I am a freelance writer for weekly PC magazine and would one day love to be the Editor on the magazine.

Cheers,

Lee
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Noddy24
 
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Reply Tue 15 Aug, 2006 01:08 pm
Summaries are easy. People who can summarize write the teaser, condensed version of the novel's plot on the flaps of the book jacket.

The Classic Summary: Boy meets Girl. Boy loses Girl. Boy wins Girl.
Summaries are easy.

Now, can you actually write the novel?
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leewoods
 
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Reply Tue 15 Aug, 2006 01:20 pm
Yes, but I wasn't asking whether or not I could write it. I was asking whether the brief summary could be turned into a half-decent novel...
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Bella Dea
 
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Reply Tue 15 Aug, 2006 01:47 pm
We don't know...can you?

Stories tend to take a life of their own. You start out with good intentions and suddenly you realize that your story has gone in a completely different direction.

A good summary doesn't mean a good story.

Write it and see.
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Scott777ab
 
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Reply Tue 15 Aug, 2006 01:48 pm
If you want some SERIOUS help with writing visit this web site.

http://www.writingforums.com/index.php
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leewoods
 
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Reply Tue 15 Aug, 2006 01:55 pm
thanks Smile
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Bella Dea
 
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Reply Tue 15 Aug, 2006 02:06 pm
Scott777ab wrote:
If you want some SERIOUS help with writing visit this web site.

http://www.writingforums.com/index.php


Are you insinuating that we aren't serious?

I am very serious.
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DrKilljoy
 
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Reply Tue 15 Aug, 2006 10:30 pm
Hmm....well, it sounds interesting. Sounds almost similiar to the start of "Five People You Meet In Heaven" but it has some differances and I can imagine you'll get a few readers from it.
Plus, writing anything is a good way to get your skills up.
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ossobuco
 
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Reply Tue 15 Aug, 2006 11:25 pm
Lee, I spent a lot of years with a fellow who wrote treatments and screenplays, and perfected.... almost, the Pitch.

from that point of view, would it make a grabber, short story, novel, screenplay? No, you lost me in it.

On the other hand, I am not such a screenplay type person, and I tend to revel in the anecdotal compilation squished into book form.... and this is anathema to box office.

Still, your plot points don't make me want to flip a page, even in the non Hollywood format.

I don't mean to be crushing - you may have a story there. You need to figure out how to tell it, even in very short form.

Not that I like Hollywood and screenplay writing, let me just adjust my own marital noose, but you could probably learn from screenplaywriting sites re the PITCH.
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rising
 
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Reply Wed 16 Aug, 2006 08:59 pm
Yes. Definately a plot that will spawn some wonderful writing. Now go. Do it. Just think about it, 10 people can sit at their easel and paint a single model. There will be 7 canvases in the end. Three people will have dropped out of the class. There will be 5 mediocre paintings of a misshapen nude in various colors. There will be 2 good paintings of a recognizable human figure. One will have the spark that makes you want to look at it again and again. That will be you.
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