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Sat 5 Aug, 2006 11:40 pm
Before I knew it, i'd been absorbed
Smothered in your love too quickly.
You lead me passed my comforts edge.
Supplied me with assurance.
I felt my insecurities
dwindle away in your hands.
You lead me further away from me
Closer to you and what you wanted us to be.
Suck me in with your words of wisdom
Like you've done this all before.
Pick me up then leave me
Leave me wanting more.
I wanted it all, afraid to fall.
Now here I am drowning in your quick sand love.
Oh my god,
Did you write that for me? How did you know?
InTraNsiTiOn,
It's a nice poem. The rhythm/rhyming needs polish, but it has potential.
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